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Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.3

Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available. v. 3
For the time being, it has always been a controversial issue amongst people whether to keep the traditional libraries or to replace all of them as boundless development in technology has brought numerous alternatives instead. I highly believe that despite all the available options, sticking to the long-established perspective towards this issue, indicating that having libraries is essential, gives the impression of being of the most reliable. Firstly, it is argued that benefits of using eBooks outweighs the published books. It is believed so because published books need to be kept in libraries, and are considered harmful to the environment causing even more damage in a long term due to the paper consumption. The more paper used to print books, the more trees are cut down. While this may be true, we cannot set fire to existing libraries and close them down for some signed editions, which needs to be referred to in some cases, are kept in ancient libraries. Therefore, it is vital that the books be accessible in both printed and electronic types. So that, it will also be fair to the people who are not able to read books on their gadgets. For example, newly written books can be released online at first and in case of success, will be printed for public access. Secondly, some believe that through some technological advances you are in a position to have access to all sources at once conveniently. This is veracious since you can listen to your favored books during the day; meanwhile you are dealing with your daily life issues. In addition, it enables you to search for any content on all the resources worldwide if you are a premium user. This point of view is accepted at some points; but others, however, are of the opinion that having access to anything, anytime may lead to some crucial problems in all aspects; for instance, killing enthusiasm for research, creativity, and most importantly enhancing some academic erroneous attitudes as plagiarism. That is resulted because searchable information, gives you a sophisticated insight of the issue. Furthermore, individuals congregate in a rather scholastic environment, which does not appear to be disadvantageous. In conclusion, I absolutely disagree that all the libraries have to be shut down. While, as is mentioned above, the proponents of this idea are rightful in some particular situations, it is impossible to refuse the indispensable role of libraries in the society.
For the time being, it has always been a controversial
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amongst
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people
whether to
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keep
the traditional libraries or to replace all of them as boundless development in technology has brought numerous alternatives
instead
. I
highly
believe that despite all the available options, sticking to the long-established perspective towards this
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issue
, indicating that having libraries is essential, gives the impression of being of the most reliable.

Firstly
, it
is argued
that benefits of using
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eBooks
outweighs the published
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books
. It
is believed
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so
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because
published
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books
need to be
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kept
in libraries, and
are considered
harmful to the environment causing even more damage in a long term due to the paper consumption. The more paper
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used
to print
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books
, the more trees are
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cut
down. While this may be true, we cannot set fire to existing libraries and close them down for
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some
signed editions, which needs to
be referred
to in
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some
cases, are
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kept
in ancient libraries.
Therefore
, it is vital that the
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books
be accessible in both printed and electronic types.
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So
that, it will
also
be
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fair
to the
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people
who are not able to read
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books
on their gadgets.
For example
,
newly
written
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books
can
be released
online at
first
and in case of success, will
be printed
for public access.

Secondly
,
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some
believe that through
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some
technological advances you are in a position to have access to all sources at once
conveniently
. This is veracious since you can listen to your favored
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books
during the day; meanwhile you are dealing with your daily life
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issues
.
In addition
, it enables you to search for any content on all the resources worldwide if you are a premium user. This point of view is
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accepted
at
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some
points;
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but
others,
however
, are of the opinion that having access to anything, anytime may lead to
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some
crucial problems in all aspects;
for instance
, killing enthusiasm for research, creativity, and most
importantly
enhancing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
academic erroneous attitudes as plagiarism. That
is resulted
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
searchable information, gives you a sophisticated insight of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issue
.
Furthermore
, individuals congregate in a
rather
scholastic environment, which does not appear to be disadvantageous.

In conclusion
, I
absolutely
disagree that all the libraries
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have to
be shut
down. While, as
is mentioned
above, the proponents of this
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idea
are rightful in
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some
particular situations, it is impossible to refuse the indispensable role of libraries in the society.
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11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
403 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
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