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Leaving in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree v.2

Leaving in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems v. 2
‘Learn a new language and get a new soul’, this adage hold a true meaning in life, as it is believed by few individuals that residing in a foreign land leads to many socio and real life challenges because of the language barrier; however, I disagree and assert that none of such issues affect to the extent that they cannot be resolved. Beyond any qualm, there are myriad of social and practical concerns that people go through abroad, such as purchasing amenities, making new friends or getting a job. But these issues can be resolved by the everyday communication with the natives; in fact, it will not be incorrect to infer that a person learns a speech better at a foreign land than in his own country. Also, with the inception of the technological era, learning has become easier, with the help of advanced applications and online tutors, learning a native language is mere a challenge. To quote an instance, a longitudinal study in Canada on Indian masses stated that indeed they go through hurdle due to communication gap, but none of such obstacles have caused them serious problems. Hence, such social and practical problems are not too big to be solved. Another pivotal factor in the aforementioned preposition is that English is a global language, widely accepted by all nations through with; it becomes even easier for the people to deal with any scenario. Additionally, countries welcoming the immigrants have provisions for a good lifestyle for them. Indian markets for examples are available in most of the countries, where people not only can purchase things of their daily use but also can do part-time jobs. Therefore, dealing in an outlandish language in an overseas country is not a huge deal. In conclusion, although it is a widespread notion that people face many kinds of problems, but in my opinion, these are not big issues to be dealt with. Nonetheless, people ought to make good use of technology and must learn some of the basic words of that country. But in future will language create barriers or there will be only one universal language? Still stays a question.
‘Learn a new
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language
and
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get
a new soul’, this adage hold a true meaning in life, as it
is believed
by few individuals that residing in a foreign land leads to
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many
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socio
and real life challenges
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because
of the
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language
barrier;
however
, I disagree and assert that none of such issues affect to the extent that they cannot
be resolved
.

Beyond any qualm, there are myriad of social and practical concerns that
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people
go through abroad, such as purchasing amenities, making new friends or getting a job.
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But
these issues can
be resolved
by the everyday communication with the natives; in fact, it will not be incorrect to infer that a person learns a speech better at a foreign land than in his
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own
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country
.
Also
, with the inception of the technological era, learning has become easier, with the
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help
of advanced applications and online tutors, learning a native
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language
is mere a challenge. To quote an instance, a longitudinal study in Canada on Indian masses stated that
indeed
they go through hurdle due to communication gap,
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but
none of such obstacles have caused them serious problems.
Hence
, such social and practical problems are not too
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big
to
be solved
.

Another pivotal factor in the aforementioned preposition is that English is a global
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language
,
widely
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accepted
by all nations through with; it becomes even easier for the
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people
to deal with any scenario.
Additionally
,
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countries
welcoming the immigrants have provisions for a
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good
lifestyle for them. Indian markets for examples are available in most of the
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countries
, where
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people
not
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only
can
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purchase
things of their daily
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use
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but
also
can do part-time jobs.
Therefore
, dealing in an outlandish
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language
in an overseas
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country
is not a huge deal.

In conclusion
, although it is a widespread notion that
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people
face
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many
kinds of problems,
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but
in my opinion, these are not
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big
issues to
be dealt
with. Nonetheless,
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people
ought to
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make
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good
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use
of technology and
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must
learn
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
some of the
basic words of that
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country
.
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But
in future will
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language
create barriers or there will be
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only
one universal
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language
?
Still
stays a question.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
To have another language is to possess a second soul.
Charlemagne

IELTS essay Leaving in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
358 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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