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Learning English At school is often seen as more important then learning local languages. If these are not taught many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages? and if so how give your your reason and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.1

Learning English At school is often seen as more important then learning local languages. If these are not taught many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages? and if so how give your your reason and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v. 1
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in the modern era,
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languages
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. It is true that English is an essential part of lifestyle,
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but
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languages
are being as much as high if we believe in that.

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a days
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people
are focusing to teach English to their
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children
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schooling
days,
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so
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.
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people
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think
that English is the
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success. In
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the requirement of English is
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now
at every step of life from
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to job and business, you required to communicate with the
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people
of
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different
part of the world. As the English
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is
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Global
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Language
It is easier for
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people
to communicate in either corner of the world.

Local
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languages
have their
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own
values and emotion attached to them. Scientist proves that the
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children
who have their
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schooling
in the
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local
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language
can
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easy and speedy understanding of the subjects. There
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are Are
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some
countries and places sticks with their
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local
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languages
for the
first
priority like Spain France China. The
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local
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languages
have there on values and tradition and the Unique Identity within it.

In my opinion, it
is required
to give importance to English for a brighter future,
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but
you cannot neglect the
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local
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language
. The school should give priorities to the
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local
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language
as compared to English it should
be done
by making
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
laws and mutual understanding of parents and
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schooling
to teach the
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local
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language
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language
to
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children
in school.

At last It is the responsibility of the
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government
to relive the
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local
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languages
within the country. It is
also
a moral responsibility of parents and schools to give more importance to the
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local
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languages
.
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40Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Learning English At school is often seen as more important then learning local languages. If these are not taught many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages? and if so how give your your reason and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
370 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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