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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? Give relevant examples from your knowledge? v. 14
Without knowing English it is almost impossible to be a citizen of Earth. Thus, in many schools learning it is the most important part of education. Even though I believe that English plays a crucial role in our life, it can also be dangerous to the local languages. As stated before, English is a really big factor in our lives. It enables us to communicate with people from all around the world. Apart from being useful for making new, international friends, English is also the language of business. Without it we are not able to get the desired job, so schools do everything to teach their students how to use it so that they are ready to go on a job market. However, we as a society cannot forget about our local languages. They may not be international - like English. But they also play an important role in our history and our lives. Through local languages - like Kaszubski in Poland - we can learn about our ancestors and keep their traditions alive. To do that we should put local languages in the school timetables and teach them to students, starting very early on. There are lots of useless subjects that could be replaced with lessons in our local languages. That way every student would leave school with knowledge of both English and his local language. In conclusion, I think teaching English should be as important as teaching local languages. And even though English may seem like the most important language of all, we should not forget about the local ones and make sure they are not at risk of extinction
Without knowing English it is almost impossible to be a citizen of Earth.
Thus
, in
many
schools
learning it is the most
important
part of education.
Even though
I believe that English plays a crucial role in our life, it can
also
be
dangerous
to the
local
languages.

As stated
before
, English is a
really
big
factor in our
lives
. It enables us to communicate with
people
from all around the world. Apart from being useful for making new, international friends, English is
also
the
language
of business. Without
it
we are not able to
get
the desired job,
so
schools
do everything to teach their students how to
use
it
so
that they are ready to go on a job market.

However
, we as a society cannot forget about our
local
languages
. They may not be international
-
like English.
But
they
also
play an
important
role in our history and our
lives
. Through
local
languages
-
like
Kaszubski
in Poland
-
we can learn about our ancestors and
keep
their traditions alive. To do that we should put
local
languages
in the
school
timetables and teach them to students, starting
very
early on. There are lots of useless subjects that could
be replaced
with lessons in our
local
languages
. That way every student would
leave
school
with knowledge of both English and his
local
language.

In conclusion
, I
think
teaching English should be as
important
as teaching
local
languages
. And
even though
English may seem like the most
important
language
of all, we should not forget about the
local
ones and
make
sure they are not at
risk
of
extinction
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IELTS essay Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

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