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LEARNING ENGLISH AT SCHOOL IS OFTEN SEEN AS MORE IMPORTANT THAN LEARNING LOCAL LANGUAGES. IF TAUGHT MANY ARE AT RISK OF DYING OUT. IN YOUR OPINION IS IT IMPORTANT FOR EVERYONE TO LEARN ENGLISH? SHOULD WE TRY TO ENSURE THE SURVIVAL OF LOCAL LANGUAGES, IF SO, HOW? GIVE REASONS FOR YOUR ANSWER AND INCLUDE ANY RELEVENT EXAMPLE FROM YOUR OWN KNOWLEDGE OR EXPERIENCE v.15

LEARNING ENGLISH AT SCHOOL IS OFTEN SEEN AS MORE IMPORTANT THAN LEARNING LOCAL LANGUAGES. IF TAUGHT MANY ARE AT RISK OF DYING OUT. IN YOUR OPINION IS IT IMPORTANT FOR EVERYONE TO LEARN ENGLISH? SHOULD WE TRY TO ENSURE THE SURVIVAL OF LOCAL LANGUAGES, IF SO, HOW? 15
English is a global language, while survival without its knowledge may be possible, growth is not. Today schools lay more emphasis on learning English than any other local languages, which are at risk of extinction, if not taught. This essay will discuss why English is important for everyone to learn and at the same time, highlight the measures necessary for the survival of local languages. To begin with, we should not forget that the world today is a global village and the world economy is a global economy, which need a common language to operate efficiently. For an illustration, the USA hires call centres and IT firms from India rather than China just because Chinese lack the knowledge of the English language. Furthermore, we can’t benefit from scientific researches and discoveries unless we are able to share them using a common expression. This problem has been encountered by countries like North and South Korea, China and others, where research papers are published in local languages and thus lack global recognition. Therefore, for growth in both economic and technological spheres, knowledge of English is indispensable. Secondly, it is also important to take steps for the survival of regional languages as they are the key to the rich heritage and culture of the society, not only the local dialects provide us with the access to the great works of literature but helps us to keep our heritage alive. To do so, schools should not only include these as an academic subject, but rather try to make them more popular among the students with the help of activities like short plays, competitions and group activities. To conclude, it is fair to say that English is the key to success on the global platform and thus important for everyone to learn; whereas local languages are a way to remain connected to the roots of one’s culture and to preserve the world history. Hence, in my opinion, both are extremely important to learn and should not be ignored.
English is a
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local
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languages
, which are at
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risk
of extinction, if not taught. This essay will discuss why English is
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important
for everyone to learn and at the same time, highlight the measures necessary for the survival of
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local
languages.

To
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with, we should not forget that the world
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today
is a
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village and the world economy is a
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global
economy, which need a common
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language
to operate
efficiently
. For an illustration, the USA hires call
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and IT firms from India
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by countries like North and South Korea, China
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and others
, where research papers
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local
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languages
and
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recognition.
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, for growth in both economic and technological spheres, knowledge of English is indispensable.

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to take steps for the survival of regional
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languages
as they are the key to the rich heritage and culture of the society, not
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only
the
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dialects provide us with the access to the great works of literature
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our heritage alive. To do
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, schools should not
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include these as an academic subject,
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rather
try to
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make
them more popular among the students with the
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help
of activities like short plays, competitions and group activities.

To conclude
, it is
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fair
to say that English is the key to success on the
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global
platform and
thus
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important
for everyone to learn; whereas
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local
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languages
are a way to remain connected to the roots of one’s culture and to preserve the world history.
Hence
, in my opinion, both are
extremely
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to learn and should not be
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IELTS essay LEARNING ENGLISH AT SCHOOL IS OFTEN SEEN AS MORE IMPORTANT THAN LEARNING LOCAL LANGUAGES. IF TAUGHT MANY ARE AT RISK OF DYING OUT. IN YOUR OPINION IS IT IMPORTANT FOR EVERYONE TO LEARN ENGLISH? SHOULD WE TRY TO ENSURE THE SURVIVAL OF LOCAL LANGUAGES, IF SO, HOW? 15

Essay
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4 paragraphs
333 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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