International brands and big businesses have large amounts of funding which they use for advertising and attracting customers to buy their products from all over the world. As a result, local businesses and shops are finding it difficult to make sales and their income is decreasing. This can be overcome by government restrictions on false advertising and providing of funds for local businesses which would help them flourish.
The main problem of buying things from big businesses is that people spend a lot of money unnecessarily on products they do not really need due to the attractive marketing skills the businesses possess. The advertisements lure both the young and the old alike into purchasing items, especially children who become demanding by watching these advertising on television. Furthermore, by spending extravagantly on international brands, people go into debt competing against who has got the latest products and equipment which is quite detrimental to the society. Moreover, local businesses suffer the consequences of the high demand of people buying foreign things.
In order to promote the selling of local products, governments must help them by funding and creating awareness of the existence of such products. For example, billboards and posters showing how locally made products are environmentally friendly and how waste is reduced would attract customers to switch from large businesses to local ones. In addition, local products must be made sturdy and quality must increase to keep customers coming back to purchase more.
In conclusion, large businesses must be banned from false advertising and creating illusions to stop people from spending wastefully. The small local businesses must thrive to attend to the needs of the people by providing good quality, reasonably priced and personalised service to attract and maintain sales.
International brands and
big
businesses
have large amounts of funding which they
use
for advertising and attracting customers to
buy
their
products
from all over the world.
As a result
,
local
businesses
and shops are finding it difficult to
make
sales and their income is decreasing. This can
be overcome
by
government
restrictions on false advertising and providing of funds for
local
businesses
which would
help
them flourish.
The main problem of buying things from
big
businesses
is that
people
spend
a lot of
money
unnecessarily
on
products
they do not
really
need due to the attractive marketing
skills
the
businesses
possess. The advertisements lure both the young and the
old
alike into purchasing items,
especially
children who become demanding by watching these advertising on television.
Furthermore
, by spending
extravagantly
on international brands,
people
go into debt competing against who has
got
the latest
products
and equipment which is quite detrimental to the society.
Moreover
,
local
businesses
suffer the consequences of the high demand of
people
buying foreign things.
In order to promote the selling of
local
products
,
governments
must
help
them by funding and creating awareness of the existence of such
products
.
For example
, billboards and posters showing how
locally
made
products
are
environmentally
friendly and how waste is
reduced
would attract customers to switch from large
businesses
to
local
ones.
In addition
,
local
products
must
be made
sturdy and quality
must
increase to
keep
customers coming back to
purchase
more.
In conclusion
, large
businesses
must
be banned
from false advertising and creating illusions to
stop
people
from spending
wastefully
. The
small
local
businesses
must
thrive to attend to the needs of the
people
by providing
good
quality,
reasonably
priced and
personalised
service to attract and maintain sales.
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28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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