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It may be true that a lot of ex-prisoners would step back on their criminal path after serving a sentence. There could be several reasons for this, and I believe that we can take various steps to tackle the issue. v.1

It may be true that a lot of ex-prisoners would step back on their criminal path after serving a sentence. There could be several reasons for this, and I believe that we can take various steps to tackle the issue. v. 1
Waste is the high-priority problem that all countries are facing across the globe. Climate change is the serious effect of this excessive waste production problem because there is no way we can recycle the rubbish at the rate we are producing it. Most of the rubbish is burnt in turn producing air pollution or it is thrown here and there which is later eaten by stray animals. This essay will discuss about some major reasons for this issue and will suggest some remedies. Firstly, an increase in population is the major factor for this much rubbish. In the past decade, there has been a 40% rise in population across the world. The more number of people is obviously going to create more garbage. Secondly, 60% of total people on earth are still illiterate, they are not aware of the issues we are facing. Out of this percentage some are not bothered to care about the environment and others are not sure about what steps they can take themselves. In short, lack of awareness is also a big factor in excessive waste production. To minimize this issue, measures have to be taken by both individuals and governments. Governments can implement stricter rules. For example, plastic is the main culprit amongst garbage problems. The government has already banned plastic, but they can set some strict punishments so that people follow it more seriously. Furthermore, they can spread awareness about this issue in schools, offices, public spaces and educate people to recycle their rubbish at source instead of sending them to factories. This will be helpful for both the individuals and for the governments. Like, the whole kitchen waste can be used to produce manure and natural gas. Maximum things from the kitchen like vegetable scraps can be fed to animals. This way we can try reducing the garbage production at the source itself. In conclusion, population and carelessness of people are the biggest factors contributing to this problem. However, this issue can be mitigated by following measure like banning plastic and making waste separation and recycling compulsory at societies itself.
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Waste
is the high-priority
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problem
that all countries are facing across the globe. Climate
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change
is the serious effect of this excessive
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waste
production
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problem
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because
there is no way we can recycle the
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rubbish
at the rate we are producing it. Most of the
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rubbish
is burnt
in turn producing air pollution or it
is thrown
here and there which is later eaten by stray animals. This essay will discuss about
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some
major reasons for this
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issue
and will suggest
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some
remedies.

Firstly
, an increase in population is the major factor for this much
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rubbish
. In the past decade, there has been a 40% rise in population across the world. The more number of
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people
is
obviously
going to create more garbage.
Secondly
, 60% of total
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people
on earth are
still
illiterate, they are not aware of the
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issues
we are facing. Out of this percentage
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some
are not bothered to care about the environment
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and others
are not sure about what steps they can take themselves. In short, lack of awareness is
also
a
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big
factor in excessive
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waste
production.

To minimize this
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issue
, measures
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have to
be taken
by both individuals and
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governments
.
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Governments
can implement stricter
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rules
.
For example
, plastic is the main culprit amongst garbage
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problems
. The
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government
has already banned plastic,
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but
they can set
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some
strict punishments
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so
that
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people
follow it more
seriously
.
Furthermore
, they can spread awareness about this
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issue
in schools, offices, public spaces and educate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to recycle their
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rubbish
at source
instead
of sending them to factories. This will be helpful for both the individuals and for the
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governments
. Like, the whole kitchen
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waste
can be
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used
to produce manure and natural gas. Maximum things from the kitchen like vegetable scraps can
be fed
to animals. This way we can try reducing the garbage production at the source itself.

In conclusion
, population and carelessness of
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people
are the biggest factors contributing to this
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problem
.
However
, this
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issue
can
be mitigated
by following measure like banning plastic and making
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
separation and recycling compulsory at societies itself.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay It may be true that a lot of ex-prisoners would step back on their criminal path after serving a sentence. There could be several reasons for this, and I believe that we can take various steps to tackle the issue. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
348 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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