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It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or danage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer. v.2

It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or danage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer. v. 2
Some people argue that, we should not borrow money from a friend because it can harm or damage the friendship. While others think that there is no problem in lending money from a friend untill unless we return it on time. I personally feel that taking money from a friend in not an issue. This can be justified by following reasons and examples. To embark with, the first and foremost reason is that friends have an obligation each others on difficult situations. As we all know, the financial problem has always existed and sometimes we cannot solve them lonely. In this way, we can appreciate more our friendship when our friends help us to cope with it. Infact, when a friend borrow money to us, we have more enthusiasm to keep our relationship. Moreover, it can strengthen the relationships. In addition, I believe that when friends lend and borrow money from each other it means that they trust each other On the other side, some people might cite that borrowing money can hurt the relationship. With this two friends lose their confidence in each other. Also, borrowing money might convert the relationships into an ordinary one. We might lose our friends when they ask something and we cannot afford it. In conclusion, all above evidence supports this undeniable fact that borrowing money from best friends can never damage our friendship.
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argue that, we should not borrow
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money
from a
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friend
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because
it can harm or damage the friendship. While others
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think
that there is no problem in lending
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money
from a
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friend
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untill
unless we return it on time. I
personally
feel that taking
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money
from a
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friend
in not an issue. This can
be justified
by following reasons and examples.

To embark with, the
first
and foremost reason is that
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friends
have an obligation each
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others
on difficult situations. As we all know, the financial problem has always existed and
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sometimes
we cannot solve them lonely. In this way, we can appreciate more our friendship when our
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friends
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help
us to cope with it.
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Infact
, when a
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friend
borrow
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money
to us, we have more enthusiasm to
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keep
our
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relationship
.
Moreover
, it can strengthen the
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relationships
.
In addition
, I believe that when
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friends
lend and borrow
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money
from each
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other
it means that they trust each
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other


On the
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side,
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some
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might cite that borrowing
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money
can hurt the
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relationship
. With this two
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friends
lose their confidence in each
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other
.
Also
, borrowing
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money
might convert the
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relationships
into an ordinary one. We might lose our
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friends
when they ask
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something and
we cannot afford it.

In conclusion
, all above evidence supports this undeniable fact that borrowing
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money
from best
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friends
can never damage our friendship.
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25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or danage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
230 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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