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It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer. v.3

It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer. v. 3
In today's fast moving world, aviation is a boon to mankind. While by other mode of transportation it would be laborious, same can be achieved in radically less time because of air-plane. Not only in terms of travelling, import and export market has been positively affected, especially for the goods that are not naturally available in different regions of the world. In the essay, I'll throw light on positive and not-so-positive impact of the phenomenon. Use of air transport for import or export of fruit and vegetables to other countries is favourable as it is faster and less time-consuming. Consequently, it aids food market where the non-available fruits/vegetables are majorly used as raw materials. For example, if excessive demand of product results in out of stock situation, it can be delivered within the time. Apart from this, globalization along with different domains of life has surely taken a mingling effect on the cuisines of countries too. So even if some harvest is not native of a country, people now-a-days like to try new and different things. While there are a lot better aspects of flights, it also comes with heavy duties and tax. And usage of air transportation for not so expensive fruits and vegetables ultimately results in soaring high prices sometimes. Expensive goods are therefore in some ways not adding much to the economy or lifestyle of people. As it is said that everything has some positives and negatives associated with it, so do flying. It depends on the requirement, urgency and financial capability of the user in this case. According to me, air transportation for import and export is a feasible choice as it ultimately cuts down extra delivery time and also enhances globalization at a faster pace.
In
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today
's
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fast
moving world, aviation is a boon to mankind. While by other mode of transportation it would be laborious, same can
be achieved
in
radically
less time
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because
of air-
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plane
. Not
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only
in terms of travelling, import and export market has been
positively
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affected
,
especially
for the
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goods
that are not
naturally
available in
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different
regions of the world. In the essay, I'll throw light on
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positive
and not-
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so
-
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positive
impact of the phenomenon.

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Use
of air transport for import or export of fruit and vegetables to other countries is
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourable' is British English.
favourable
as it is faster and less time-consuming.
Consequently
, it aids food market where the non-available fruits/vegetables are
majorly
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used
as raw materials.
For example
, if excessive demand of product results in out of stock situation, it can
be delivered
within the time. Apart from this, globalization along with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
domains of life has
surely
taken a mingling effect on the cuisines of countries too.
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So
even if
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some
harvest is not native of a country,
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people
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now
-a-days like to try new and
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different
things.

While there are a lot better aspects of flights, it
also
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comes
with heavy duties and tax. And usage of air transportation for not
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so
expensive fruits and vegetables
ultimately
results in soaring high prices
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sometimes
. Expensive
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goods
are
therefore
in
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some
ways not adding much to the economy or lifestyle of
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people
.

As it
is said
that everything has
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some
positives and negatives associated with it,
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so
The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go flying".
do flying
. It depends on the requirement, urgency and financial capability of the user
in this case
.
This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using "in my opinion" or "I think".
According to me
, air transportation for import and export is a feasible choice as it
ultimately
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cuts
down extra delivery time and
also
enhances globalization at a faster pace.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
The limits of my language are the limits of my world.
Ludwig Wittgenstein

IELTS essay It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
290 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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