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At present, the media affect people's lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development? v.1

At present, the media affect people's lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development? v. 1
The technology advancement providing books in digital forms has given a new experience in the reading book. This essay will discuss the convenience of using the e-book to enjoy reading and the piracy problem which inevitably entailed its favourable advantage. Never before has read a book provided more convenience and pleasure. Since it is integrated on digital life experience, this electronic product offers more flexibility both in using and purchasing it. People can adjust the book viability and appearance conveniently. If they want to buy a new one, they just need to visit the online store, such as Alibaba or eBay store, that provide a million number of books purchasable directly without leaving home. This online service support results in more enjoyable reading experience using e-book than the non-electronic version of it. In spite of flexibility, the piracy matter has been a concern for both writer and publisher of the e-book. The digitalised form makes it easier to be copied and transferred to others without purchasing the book from the publisher. A 2014 study from Bookworld Organization revealed that a vast majority of e-book owners got the electronic book without spending any dollars to the writers. They got the e-books either from their colleagues or freely downloaded e-book websites. This illegal way of obtaining copyrighted text seems to reduce the income of book’s owners and distributors. As a conclusion, the e-book has offered us the more enjoyable reading activity by its flexibility while the piracy problem shows us the need of respect for book owners. Thus, I firmly believe that the best way to enjoy reading e-books is to purchase them legally from any authorised stores.
The technology advancement providing
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books
in digital forms has
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given
a new experience in the
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reading
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book
. This essay will discuss the convenience of using the e-book to enjoy
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reading
and the piracy problem which
inevitably
entailed its
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favourable
advantage.

Never
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before
has read a
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book
provided more convenience and pleasure. Since it
is integrated
on digital life experience, this electronic product offers more flexibility both in using and purchasing it.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
can adjust the
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book
viability and appearance
conveniently
. If they want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a new one, they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
need to visit the online store, such as Alibaba or eBay store, that provide a million number of
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books
purchasable
directly
without leaving home. This online service support results in more enjoyable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reading
experience using e-book than the non-electronic version of it.

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In spite of
flexibility, the piracy matter has been a concern for both writer and publisher of the e-book. The
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digitalised
form
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
it easier to
be copied
and transferred to others without purchasing the
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book
from the publisher. A 2014 study from
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Bookworld
Organization revealed that a vast majority of e-book owners
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
the electronic
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book
without spending any dollars to the writers. They
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
the e-books either from their colleagues or
freely
downloaded e-book websites. This illegal way of obtaining copyrighted text seems to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the income of
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book’s
owners and distributors.

As a conclusion, the e-book has offered us the more enjoyable
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reading
activity by its flexibility while the piracy problem
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
us the need of respect for
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book
owners.
Thus
, I
firmly
believe that the best way to enjoy
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reading
e-books is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
them
legally
from any
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authorised
stores.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay At present, the media affect people's lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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