People argue that spending on protection of wildlife should be reduced as there are other serious issues to spend on.
In my opinion, protection of wildlife is essential but not at the cost of other social issues.
People in favour of spending on protection of wildlife believe that it is the responsibility of humans to protect the
wildlife, otherwise it will cause exntinction of certain animals which can have detrimental effects on our ecosystem.
There are specific species which lie above or below of other species in the food cycle and if their food cycle is
disturbed it would badly effect our ecosystem. For example, if a certain specie becomes extinct, it means no food
for specie next in food chain. As a result, that specie too face the threat of extinction.
However, other issues such as poverty is far more pertinent to solve than protection of wildlife. Poverty is more
serious issue as it threatens the survival of humankind. For that, it is important to spend more on humans including
health and education which will have a positive effect on the soceity. For example, a person who is healthy both
mentally and physically is not a burden on soceity and having proper set of skills enable him to a job, ultimately
contributing to soceity. Similarly, a large number of people are out of school because of not being able to bear
expenses. Spending in education sector by subsidising the tuition fees will increase the literacy rate of the soceity,
therefore increasing the number of opportunities to earn money and reducing poverty.
To conclude, wild life is part of our world and its protection is of utmost importance but other more serious issues
should be solved first
People
argue that spending on
protection
of
wildlife
should be
reduced
as there are
other
serious issues to spend on.
In my opinion,
protection
of
wildlife
is essential
but
not at the cost of
other
social issues.
People
in
favour
of spending on
protection
of
wildlife
believe that it is the responsibility of humans to protect the
wildlife
,
otherwise
it will cause
exntinction
of certain animals which can have detrimental effects on our ecosystem.
There are specific species which lie above or below of
other
species in the food cycle and if their food cycle is
disturbed
it would
badly
effect
our ecosystem.
For example
, if a certain
specie
becomes extinct, it means no
food
for
specie
next
in food chain.
As a result
, that
specie
too face
the threat of extinction.
However
,
other
issues such as poverty is far more pertinent to solve than
protection
of
wildlife
. Poverty is
more
serious
issue as it threatens the survival of humankind. For that, it is
important
to spend more on humans
including
health
and education which will have a
positive
effect on the
soceity
.
For example
, a person who is healthy
both
mentally and
physically
is not a burden on
soceity
and having proper set of
skills
enable him to a job,
ultimately
contributing
to
soceity
.
Similarly
,
a large number of
people
are out of school
because
of not being able to bear
expenses
. Spending in education sector by
subsidising
the tuition fees will increase the literacy rate of the
soceity
,
therefore
increasing the number of opportunities to earn money and reducing poverty.
To conclude
, wild life is part of our world and its
protection
is of utmost importance
but
other
more serious issues
should
be solved
first
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17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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