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In the modern world, the image is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. Do you agree or disagree? v.1

In the modern world, the image is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. v. 1
The emergence of the internet and technologies have a wide range of effects on different facets of the society. One of these impacts is the way people communicate with each other. Although they still can send text and written words to each other, I firmly believe that this way of communication is going to obsolete in the future since they can send images to each other. I believe in this way because of two main reasons that I will explore in the following essay. first and foremost, pictures are the most convenient way of communicating. For writing down a note people should have considerable experience to convey their meanings. All the students in the primary schools are obliged to write essays to empower this ability. Nevertheless, the majority of us did not gain enough capability to write down our thoughts. With the advent of smartphones, everything has changed since people can simply take the photo of their surroundings and send it in a blink of an eye. it does not need to put any effort, just press a button on your smartphone. it should be mentioned that popularity of the Instagram which is a social media for sharing the photos is because of this convenience. Users not only can share their pictures easily, but also the can realize feeling and location of their followers included their family and friends. secondly, pictures contain more detail and information than a text. Ubiquitously, Most of the reasons for communicating are based on one thing and it is to assure others like families or friends that you are healthy and in a good situation. Accordingly, An smile in the picture definitely is equivalent to the two paragraphs of a written letter or text. Furthermore, pictures play a vital role in the news since they can spread feeling and contents simultaneously. It should be stressed that various governments try to misuse the ability and propagate their belief to the society by providing pictures that cannot explain the main reason for an event. In a nutshell, I agree with the idea that the way of communication are experiencing major change and people tend to send a picture to each other rather than written words. I believe this way because it is easier and it has more details and information.
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different
facets of the society. One of these impacts is the way
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people
communicate with each
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other
. Although they
still
can
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send
text and written words to each
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other
, I
firmly
believe that this way of communication is going to obsolete in the future since they can
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send
images to each
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other
. I believe in this way
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because
of two main reasons that I will explore in the following essay.

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first
and foremost,
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pictures
are the most convenient way of communicating. For writing down a note
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people
should have considerable experience to convey their meanings. All the students in the primary schools
are obliged
to write essays to empower this ability.
Nevertheless
, the majority of us did not gain
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enough
capability to write down our thoughts. With the advent of smartphones, everything has
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changed
since
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people
can
simply
take the photo of their surroundings and
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send
it in a blink of an eye.
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it
does not need to put any effort,
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just
press a button on your smartphone.
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it
should
be mentioned
that popularity of the Instagram which is a social media for sharing the photos is
because of this
convenience. Users not
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only
can share their
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pictures
easily
,
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but
also
the can realize feeling and location of their followers included their family and friends.

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secondly
,
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pictures
contain more detail and information than a text.
Ubiquitously
, Most of the reasons for communicating
are based
on one thing and it is to assure others like families or friends that you are healthy and in a
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good
situation.
Accordingly
, An smile in the
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picture
definitely is equivalent to the two paragraphs of a written letter or text.
Furthermore
,
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pictures
play a vital role in the news since they can spread feeling and contents
simultaneously
. It should be
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stressed
that various
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governments
try to misuse the ability and propagate their belief to the society by providing
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pictures
that cannot
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explain
the main reason for an
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event
.

In a nutshell, I
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agree
with the
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idea
that the way of communication are experiencing major
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change
and
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people
tend to
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send
a
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picture
to each
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other
rather
than written words. I believe this way
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because
it is easier and it has more
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details
and information.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay In the modern world, the image is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
383 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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