There is a school of thought that learning local traditions is more essential than world history for school pupils. Nevertheless, I am in favor of the idea that it is equally important for them to study local, national and global history.
On the one hand, the history of local and nation plays an irreplaceable role in the development process of children. Kids need to be aware of the events of their country’s past, which enhances their patriotism. Vietnam wars are particular examples of the erecting, defensing progress and heroes who sacrificed for the nation’s freedom. Also, local history probably increases the social knowledge of children. It can be clearly seen that an educational system involving the history of their own country or region enables children to know how important local cultural traditions have developed.
On the other hand, the benefit of studying world history should not be underestimated. Schoolchildren are able to develop an understanding of the past experiences of other peoples through historical lessons of the world. As a result, it will be easier for them to form an empathy by knowing about the origins and past development of people around the world. Moreover, children may understand how the history of one country has come to affect the history of other countries. To illustrate, world history provided children with explanation why one nation became colony of another and the impacts remained until today.
In conclusion, I would argue that not only local history but also world history is worth teaching to schoolboys and schoolgirls.
There is a school of
thought
that learning
local
traditions is more essential than
world
history
for school pupils.
Nevertheless
, I am in favor of the
idea
that it is
equally
important
for them to study
local
, national and global history.
On the one hand, the
history
of
local
and nation plays an irreplaceable role in the development process of
children
. Kids need to be aware of the
events
of their
country’s
past, which enhances their patriotism.
Vietnam wars
are particular examples of the erecting, defensing progress and heroes who sacrificed for the nation’s freedom.
Also
,
local
history
probably
increases the social knowledge of
children
. It can be
clearly
seen
that an educational system involving the
history
of their
own
country
or region enables
children
to know how
important
local
cultural traditions have developed.
On the other hand
, the benefit of studying
world
history
should not
be underestimated
. Schoolchildren are able to develop an understanding of the
past experiences
of other peoples through historical lessons of the
world
.
As a result
, it will be easier for them to form an empathy by knowing about the origins and past development of
people
around the
world
.
Moreover
,
children
may understand how the
history
of one
country
has
come
to affect the
history
of other
countries
. To illustrate,
world
history
provided
children
with explanation why one nation became colony of another and the impacts remained until
today
.
In conclusion
, I would argue that not
only
local
history
but
also
world
history
is worth teaching to schoolboys and schoolgirls.
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