It is generally accepted that hobby plays an essential role in the lives of almost every individual. However, while some argue that enjoyment could be achieved only with demanding hobbies, I would disagree with this statement for two reasons.
The first reason why I am against with the idea of people attaining enjoyment only with difficult hobbies is that people have different tastes in taking hobbies. Some commentators would argue that for some such as thrill seekers, they would get pleasure only when they participate in tiresome experiences such as mountain climbing. However, I concede that this context is only for some because there are also countless members of society who feel delighted when they participate in undemanding hobbies such as drawing or reading. Thus as for the latter group, strenuous hobbies would not satisfy them.
Further reason why I would argue against only difficult hobbies offer enjoyable emotion is that every hobbies have their unique advantages for various people. For example, knitting or reading makes doers calm and improves their concentration. As a result, those who find themselves peaceful in these conditions are more likely to find enjoyment in such kinds of hobbies. Likewise, some are into exercising and weight lifting as these hobbies are excellent for health and appearance which are their first priorities. Therefore, people tend to enjoy hobbies and their results rather than the difficulties of hobbies.
Having discussed about why I disagree with some who feel that difficult hobbies provide enjoyment, I would say that when it comes to enjoyment, not only do hobbies affect people through their unique features and effects, but they also are differ depending on the type of person. Hence, on balance, it is unwise to claim that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
It is
generally
accepted
that
hobby
plays an essential role in the
lives
of almost every individual.
However
, while
some
argue that
enjoyment
could
be achieved
only
with demanding
hobbies
, I would disagree with this statement for two reasons.
The
first
reason why I am against with the
idea
of
people
attaining
enjoyment
only
with
difficult
hobbies
is that
people
have
different
tastes in taking
hobbies
.
Some
commentators would argue that for
some
such as thrill seekers, they would
get
pleasure
only
when they participate in tiresome experiences such as mountain climbing.
However
, I concede that this context is
only
for
some
because
there are
also
countless members of society who feel delighted when they participate in undemanding
hobbies
such as drawing or reading.
Thus
as for the latter group, strenuous
hobbies
would not satisfy them.
Further
reason why I would argue against
only
difficult
hobbies
offer enjoyable emotion is that every
hobbies
have their unique advantages for various
people
.
For example
, knitting or reading
makes
doers calm and
improves
their concentration.
As a result
, those who find themselves peaceful in these conditions are more likely to find
enjoyment
in such kinds of
hobbies
.
Likewise
,
some
are into exercising and weight lifting as these
hobbies
are excellent for health and appearance which are their
first
priorities.
Therefore
,
people
tend to enjoy
hobbies
and their results
rather
than the difficulties of hobbies.
Having
discussed about why
I disagree with
some
who feel that
difficult
hobbies
provide
enjoyment
, I would say that when it
comes
to
enjoyment
, not
only
do
hobbies
affect
people
through their unique features and effects,
but
they
also
are
differ
depending on the type of person.
Hence
, on balance, it is unwise to claim that
hobbies
need to be
difficult
to be enjoyable.