It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1
It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. v. 1
In today's world, technology and culture have become an inextricable aspects because technology is leaving its imprint on culture. However, some opine that with the advancement in technology, traditional values and cultures are in jeopardy, thus cannot go together. Here, I partially accord with this statement.
To begin with, technology has oversimplified many things on account of which people are now able to comprehend several complicated things such as cultures, values and so on, in a better way due to manifold reasons. Firstly, technology facilitates someone to conveniently understand the culture because earlier, it was a pipe dream for people to know about culture, but now the roots of culture can be easily dug out, thereby one can become more intellectually sharp and aware. On the top of that, many people face several problems in visiting various cultural places owing to health issues, financial problems and many more, but now anyone can easily feel experience of cultural places by using technology, because every cultural place with full detail is available on the internet, which is again a best way to know a culture.
However, one cannot procrastinate the negative sides of technology on culture. Technology has made people more cynical and lethargic due to which people are no more active to even think about their culture, which seems very pathetic. Furthermore, changes in the mindset of people are the result of advance technology, which in turn has made people to not give more importance to their cultures and traditions, which is again a horrendous situation. For instance, it has noticed in many surveys that people prefer to spend more time on technology, rather than doing cultural activities.
In conclusion, I reckon one cannot be successful as long as he/she does not know his/her culture because cultures are the way of life.
In
today
's world,
technology
and
culture
have become an inextricable
aspects
because
technology
is leaving its imprint on
culture
.
However
,
some
opine that with the advancement in
technology
, traditional values and
cultures
are in jeopardy,
thus
cannot go together. Here, I
partially
accord with this statement.
To
begin
with,
technology
has oversimplified
many
things on account of which
people
are
now
able to comprehend several complicated things such as
cultures
, values and
so
on, in a better way due to manifold reasons.
Firstly
,
technology
facilitates someone to
conveniently
understand the
culture
because
earlier, it was a pipe dream for
people
to know about
culture
,
but
now
the roots of
culture
can be
easily
dug out, thereby one can become more
intellectually
sharp and aware. On the top of that,
many
people
face several problems in visiting various
cultural
places owing to health issues, financial problems and
many
more,
but
now
anyone can
easily
feel experience of
cultural
places by using
technology
,
because
every
cultural
place with full detail is available on the internet, which is again
a
best way to know a culture.
However
, one cannot procrastinate the
negative
sides of
technology
on
culture
.
Technology
has made
people
more cynical and lethargic due to which
people
are no more active to even
think
about their
culture
, which seems
very
pathetic.
Furthermore
,
changes
in the mindset of
people
are the result of advance
technology
, which in turn has made
people
to not give more importance to their
cultures
and traditions, which is again a horrendous situation.
For instance
, it has noticed in
many
surveys that
people
prefer to spend more time on
technology
,
rather
than doing
cultural
activities.
In conclusion
, I reckon one cannot be successful as long as he/she does not know his/her
culture
because
cultures
are the way of life.
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34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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