Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural area v.1
Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural area v. 1
In recent decades, crime rate among different areas in most countries has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although crime rate in metropolitan areas is higher than it is in rural ones, can be attributed to whole host of reasons, some feasible solutions can be considered to address this.
There are a number of reasons why this pattern exists. First, since urban areas are more ethnically diverse than rural ones, leading to the likelihood of conflict causing crime among people with different behavior and belief systems is higher. For example, racism with people of color still alive, just a minor conflict among individuals in urban areas can get people into bloody fights, which potentially leads to crime. Second, since metropolitan areas are more densely populated, citizens have to compete for limited opportunities and scare resources. Plenty of evidence suggests that those who in the disadvantageous position in society would have a higher tendency to commit crimes, even petty ones, just to make a living.
Nevertheless, there are also a variety of solutions to diminish crime rate, either in urban areas or rural ones. First, by organizing social cultural activities, the local officials can help people from different cultural background gain mutual understanding. For instance, although Toronto is the most melting pot in the world, the crime rate is among lowest thanks to multicultural activities. Second, enforcing stricter punishments would act as a deterrent again the motivation to commit crime. In fact, realizing that the costs of breaking the law are too high, every potential criminal would think twice before engaging in illegal activities.
In conclusion, the cultural diversity and populous can explain the problem. By focusing on the differences among people and the law, crime rates in not only cities but also rural areas would reduce.
In recent decades,
crime
rate
among
different
areas
in most countries has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although
crime
rate
in metropolitan
areas
is higher than it is in
rural
ones
, can
be attributed
to whole host of reasons,
some
feasible solutions can
be considered
to address this.
There are a number of reasons why this pattern exists.
First
, since urban
areas
are more
ethnically
diverse than
rural
ones
, leading to the likelihood of conflict causing
crime
among
people
with
different
behavior and belief systems is higher.
For example
, racism with
people
of color
still
alive,
just
a minor conflict among individuals in urban
areas
can
get
people
into bloody fights, which
potentially
leads to
crime
. Second, since metropolitan
areas
are more
densely
populated, citizens
have to
compete for limited opportunities and scare resources.
Plenty
of evidence suggests that those who in the disadvantageous position in society would have a higher tendency to commit
crimes
, even petty
ones
,
just
to
make
a living.
Nevertheless
, there are
also
a variety of solutions to diminish
crime
rate
, either in urban
areas
or
rural
ones
.
First
, by organizing social cultural activities, the local officials can
help
people
from
different
cultural background gain mutual understanding.
For instance
, although Toronto is the most melting pot in the world, the
crime
rate
is among
lowest
thanks to multicultural activities. Second, enforcing stricter punishments would act as a deterrent again the motivation to commit
crime
. In fact, realizing that the costs of breaking the law are too high, every potential criminal would
think
twice
before
engaging in illegal activities.
In conclusion
, the cultural diversity and populous can
explain
the problem. By focusing on the differences among
people
and the law,
crime
rates
in not
only
cities
but
also
rural
areas
would
reduce
.
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