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It is better to save money than to spend it How far do you agree with this statement Is saving more important than spending in today s world Give reasons for your answer and provide ideas and examples from your own experience You should write at least 250 v.1

It is better to save money than to spend it How far Is saving more important than spending in today s world 1
Many individuals believe that the remuneration of teachers should be as per their students' results, while others don't feel like that and suggest it to be the way it is. I believe, the learner's result as output is subjective to his/her passion of interest rather than the mentor's skill. In this essay, I will argue for the unbiased pay-checks of teachers. To begin with, for one set of people, the only yardstick to judge are the results. They consider it only by presuming it should be the same for every individual candidate in a subject. The latest technological analysis supports this idea, by stating that a skilful mentor can produce better results than in comparison to the others, who are not up to that supreme potential. For Instance, a study published by Times mentioned that in major Universities across the globe, teachers are paid 30% more than their peers, whose results are inevitably 50% better than their peers. However, the grasping power of every candidate is very subjective as per his/her interest. The student, who is good at Maths, might not be the case in English subject; wherein the passion lies more in one over the other. Irrespective of trainer's commitment and competency in the subject, it is bound to be the distinguished results for each Individual in different courses. To illustrate, it is observed that same student has been able to achieve 90% in one subject, while only 60% in the other one. To conclude, I believe, this noble profession to be kept intact, away from senseless discrimination of results bound pay checks despite of the fact, their fellow learners' captivity towards each individual subject. Therefore, this noble profession can be survived with this prejudice.
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believe that the remuneration of teachers should be as per their students'
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results
, while others don't feel like that and suggest it to be the way it is. I believe, the learner's
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result
as output is subjective to his/her passion of interest
rather
than the mentor's
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skill
. In this essay, I will argue for the unbiased pay-
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people
, the
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yardstick to judge are the
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results
. They consider it
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only
by presuming it should be the same for every
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candidate in a
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subject
. The latest technological analysis supports this
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idea
, by stating that a
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mentor can produce better
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results
than
in comparison
to the others, who are not up to that supreme potential.
For Instance
, a study published by Times mentioned that in major Universities across the globe, teachers
are paid
30% more than their peers, whose
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results
are
inevitably
50% better than their peers.

However
, the grasping power of every candidate is
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very
subjective as per his/her interest. The student, who is
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at
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Maths
, might not be the case in English
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subject
; wherein the passion lies more in one over the
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other
. Irrespective of trainer's commitment and competency in the
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subject
, it
is bound
to be the distinguished
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results
for each
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Individual
in
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different
courses. To illustrate, it
is observed
that same student has been able to achieve 90% in one
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subject
, while
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only
60% in the
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one.

To conclude
, I believe, this noble profession to be
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kept
intact, away from senseless discrimination of
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results
bound pay
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checks
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despite of
the fact, their fellow learners' captivity towards each
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individual
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subject
.
Therefore
, this noble profession can
be survived
with this prejudice.
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IELTS essay It is better to save money than to spend it How far Is saving more important than spending in today s world 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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