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You should spend about 40 minutes on this question It is better to save money than to spend it How far do you agree with this statement Is saving more important than spending in today s world Give reasons for your answer and provide ideas and examples fro v.1

You should spend about 40 minutes on this question It is better to save money than to spend it How far Is saving more important than spending in today s world 1
In modern times, the issue of petrol price has become highly controversial. It has been suggested that increasing oil prices might help to solve the problem of countless traffic jams and air pollution. However, I strongly disagree with the view, as in my opinion, it may not be as impactful as using other sustainable source of energy, in tackling this issue. In this essay, I will provide some arguments to support my opinion. On the one hand, there are people who think that increasing the price of petrol will reduce its use, as a result, decrease rising traffic congestion and pollution. However, people will continue using it in the absence of better options of travel and commute. Hence, it will not bring much change in solving growing traffic issues and pollution. In fact, it affects not only the use of cars, but also the prices of food items and other goods. On the other hand, A good possible solution to consider is that improvement in public transportation is one of the best ways which can encourage people to travel by trains and buses. Thus, it will minimize the number of vehicles on the road and in turn pollute. Finally, if more alternative energy such as water or sustainable ones like wind power and solar power are utilized to run vehicles, so there will be less hazardous gasses in the air which helps to solve the air pollution noticeably. In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, increasing the cost of petrol can not be an effective factor to reduce consumption of this energy, also it is not the best way to resolve growing traffic congestion and pollution. Thus, the best solution would be to use the other renewable source of energy in public transport system which can considerably bring down traffic and pollution problems.
In modern times, the issue of petrol
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price
has become
highly
controversial. It has
been suggested
that increasing oil
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prices
might
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help
to solve the problem of countless
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traffic
jams and air
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pollution
.
However
, I
strongly
disagree with the view, as in my opinion, it may not be as impactful as using
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other
sustainable source of
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energy
, in tackling this issue. In this essay, I will provide
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some
arguments to support my opinion.

On the one hand, there are
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people
who
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think
that increasing the
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price
of petrol will
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reduce
its
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use
,
as a result
, decrease rising
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traffic
congestion and
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pollution
.
However
,
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people
will continue using it in the absence of better options of travel and commute.
Hence
, it will not bring much
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change
in solving growing
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traffic
issues and
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pollution
. In fact, it affects not
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only
the
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use
of cars,
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but
also
the
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prices
of food items and
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other
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goods
.

On the
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other
hand, A
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good
possible solution to consider is that improvement in public transportation is one of the best ways which can encourage
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people
to travel by trains and buses.
Thus
, it will minimize the number of vehicles on the road and in turn pollute.

Finally
, if more alternative
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energy
such as water or sustainable ones like wind power and solar power
are utilized
to run vehicles,
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so
there will be less hazardous gasses in the air which
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helps
to solve the air
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pollution
noticeably
.

In conclusion
, from what has
been discussed
above, increasing the cost of petrol can not be an effective factor to
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reduce
consumption of this
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energy
,
also
it is not the best way to resolve growing
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traffic
congestion and
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pollution
.
Thus
, the best solution would be to
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use
the
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other
renewable source of
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energy
in public transport system which can
considerably
bring down
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traffic
and
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pollution
problems.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay You should spend about 40 minutes on this question It is better to save money than to spend it How far Is saving more important than spending in today s world 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
304 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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