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It is better for college students t live in schools than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree? v.1

It is better for college students t live in schools than live at home with their parents. v. 1
The environment has much more impact on a human day to day life individuals and companies have equal responsibility for the government to the environment. This essay will discuss resonance in industries are more responsible than government in the aspect of the environment there is much to do. The environment gives life to the peoples' growth of these both are interlinked with each other while some people are polluting others do not. They are much more responsible. Individuals good developed greenery around them, they could encourage the usage of biodegradable things such as cotton bags, jute bags rather than plastic they could support the government schemes to increase the land tree ratio by plantation. For instance, improving bonsai culture and home cultivation. People must be aware of what to choose because of the rapid depletion of atmosphere people better be shifted to eco-friendly things. Organisations and environment are social-related surroundings is much more affected by companies organisation can do many things to save the climate, for instance, building up Gardens and setting up greenery also they could use biofuel based vehicles instead of fossil fuel or crude oil-based companies could Run several camps and awareness program about this they can even make challenges to motivate Their employees with sportive spirit organisations have several ways to Incur healthy situation back. In conclusion, I believe that individuals have the responsibilities also companies because of the depleting environment, people are facing several issues to overcome such people should be more responsible and make the environment better.
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more impact on a human
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day to day
life individuals and
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companies
have equal responsibility for the
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government
to the
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environment
. This essay will discuss resonance in industries are more responsible than
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government
in the aspect of the
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environment
there is
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much
to do.

The
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environment
gives life to the peoples' growth of these both
are interlinked
with each other while
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some
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people
are polluting others do not. They are
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much
more responsible. Individuals
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good
developed greenery around them, they could encourage the usage of biodegradable things such as cotton bags, jute bags
rather
than plastic they could support the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
schemes to increase the land tree ratio by plantation.
For instance
, improving bonsai culture and home cultivation.
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People
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must
be aware of what to choose
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because
of the rapid depletion of atmosphere
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people
better
be shifted
to eco-friendly things.

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Organisations
and
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are social-related surroundings is
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much
more
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by
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companies
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organisation
can do
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many
things to save the climate,
for instance
, building up Gardens and setting up greenery
also
they could
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use
biofuel based vehicles
instead
of fossil fuel or crude oil-based
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companies
could Run several camps and awareness program about this they can even
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make
challenges to motivate Their employees with sportive spirit
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organisations
have several ways to Incur healthy situation back.

In conclusion
, I believe that individuals have the responsibilities
also
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companies
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because
of the depleting
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environment
,
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people
are facing several issues to overcome such
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people
should be more responsible and
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make
the
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environment
better.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay It is better for college students t live in schools than live at home with their parents. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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