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It is believed by some that people should take a yearly driving test in order to ensure safety on the roads, while others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. v.1

It is believed by some that people should take a yearly driving test in order to ensure safety on the roads, while others do not agree. v. 1
In recent times it has been seen that road accidents are surging day by day. It is considered by many that evaluation of one's driving skills should be done by taking driving test yearly. which in result will ensure safety on roads. However, others think that it is not required. In my opinion, Driving test evaluation is not required as it is already done when a person received the license. Firstly, if these tests started then It will make the situation worse. As we know that in present scenario, for getting their license, people have to stand in long queues and wait for many days to finally have their licence. If this evaluation starts then these offices will be more crowded than ususal and people might face additional problems. Secondly, Driving is a skill, If once owned by someone then its with them for lifetime. So, they need not to take test again to show that they know how to drive. For example, a recent survey by traffic police showed that the people with licences drive more carelessly in comparison of the people without having all required documents. In addition to that, instead of taking these driving tests again to ensure safetly, people should be taught basic rules and regulations to drive on highways. If they are aware of simple guidelines like when to overtake and when not and educating them about sign boards might lower the risk of accidents. Hoardings should be there to keep them reminding of their family at home waiting for them. For instance, a study revealed that such teachings and campeigns has reduced the rate of mishappenigs to 20%. To conclude, individuals should be taught about traffic sign boards and guidelines to drive safely on road instead of taking driving test again and again.
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that road accidents are surging day by day. It
is considered
by
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many
that evaluation of one's
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driving
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skills
should
be done
by taking
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driving
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test
yearly.
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which
in result will ensure safety on roads.
However
, others
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think
that it is not required. In my opinion,
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Driving
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test
evaluation is not required as it is already done when a person received the license.

Firstly
, if these
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tests
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started
then It will
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make
the situation worse. As we know that in present scenario, for getting their license,
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people
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have to
stand in long queues and wait for
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many
days to
finally
have their
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licence
. If this evaluation
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starts
then these offices will be more crowded than
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ususal
and
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people
might face additional problems.
Secondly
,
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Driving
is a
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skill
, If once
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owned
by someone then
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its
with them for lifetime.
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So
, they need not
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to take
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test
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again
to
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show
that they know how to
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drive
.
For example
, a recent survey by traffic police
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showed
that the
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people
with
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licences
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drive
more
carelessly
in comparison
of the
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people
without having all required documents.

In addition
to that,
instead
of taking these
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driving
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tests
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again
to ensure
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safetly
,
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people
should
be taught
basic
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rules
and regulations to
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drive
on highways. If they are aware of simple guidelines like when to overtake and when not and educating them about
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sign
boards might lower the
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risk
of accidents. Hoardings should be there to
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keep
them reminding of their family at home waiting for them.
For instance
, a study revealed that such teachings and
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campeigns
has
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reduced
the rate of
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mishappenigs
to 20%.

To conclude
, individuals should
be taught
about traffic
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sign
boards and guidelines to
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drive
safely
on road
instead
of taking
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driving
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test
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again
and
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again
.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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IELTS essay It is believed by some that people should take a yearly driving test in order to ensure safety on the roads, while others do not agree. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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