It is believed by many people that ‘If people have more money, they are generally happier. ’ v.1
It is believed by many people that ‘If people have more money, they are generally happier. ’ v. 1
It is commonly believed that money brings happiness. However, it is a debatable fact that wealthier persons are happier and happiness is directly related to the money. According to me, money plays a vital in gaining happiness but a person feels joyful because of several reasons and they may or may be linked with money.
To begin with, money is important to satisfy the basic needs for survival. Nowadays, we require money everywhere- that could be educational institutions, hospitals, supermarkets, et cetera. A rich person can obviously afford to visit various places around the world, which makes one happier. Moreover, today, for spiritual or philosophical guidance one needs money. In few cases, one may obtain joy by helping the needy people by giving a handsome amount of donations. In this way, one might get happiness. Therefore, one may consider that, ‘Money is the existing God’ in today’s world and one becomes happier when one has money. However, real happiness is priceless and it cannot be attained with money.
Some others may argue that money could be useful to purchase the required things, nevertheless, one cannot buy happiness. For example, the happiness in the eyes of a mother when she gives birth to a baby cannot be bought by money. Next, real happiness is directly linked to the soul satisfaction. One can get exuberant joy without money as if by participating in charity work and so on. Hence, it is clear that one cannot relate happiness with money. Money can buy a luxurious house but cannot guarantee joy. Happiness comes from a satisfied soul and sound body while money can ensure the materialistic joys.
To summarise, one may consider that money is very crucial in achieving happiness and some sort of people may also consider that ‘money makes the mare go’. However, what I believe is that money is certainly an important factor but not a sole factor to achieve happiness. Thus, I strongly disagree that happiness is obtained by money in all the cases.
It is
commonly
believed that
money
brings
happiness
.
However
, it is a debatable fact that wealthier persons are happier and
happiness
is
directly
related to the
money
.
According to me
,
money
plays a vital in gaining
happiness
but
a person feels joyful
because
of several
reasons and
they may or may
be linked
with money.
To
begin
with,
money
is
important
to satisfy the basic needs for survival. Nowadays, we require
money
everywhere- that could be educational institutions, hospitals, supermarkets,
et cetera
. A rich person can
obviously
afford to visit various places around the world, which
makes
one happier.
Moreover
,
today
, for spiritual or philosophical guidance one needs
money
. In few cases, one may obtain joy by helping the needy
people
by giving a handsome amount of donations. In this way, one might
get
happiness
.
Therefore
, one may consider that,
‘Money
is the existing God’ in
today
’s world and one becomes happier when one has
money
.
However
, real
happiness
is priceless and it cannot
be attained
with money.
Some
others may argue that
money
could be useful to
purchase
the required things,
nevertheless
, one cannot
buy
happiness
.
For example
, the
happiness
in the eyes of a mother when she gives birth to a baby cannot be
bought
by
money
.
Next
, real
happiness
is
directly
linked to the soul satisfaction. One can
get
exuberant joy without
money
as if by participating in charity work and
so
on.
Hence
, it is
clear
that one cannot relate
happiness
with
money
.
Money
can
buy
a luxurious
house
but
cannot guarantee joy.
Happiness
comes
from a satisfied soul and sound body while
money
can ensure the materialistic joys.
To
summarise
, one may consider that
money
is
very
crucial in achieving
happiness
and
some
sort of
people
may
also
consider that
‘money
makes
the mare go’.
However
, what I believe is that
money
is
certainly
an
important
factor
but
not a sole factor to achieve
happiness
.
Thus
, I
strongly
disagree that
happiness
is obtained
by
money
in all the cases.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes