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It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v.1

It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 1
According to some people, digital media like a computer should supplant books in school. I partially agree with this statement, although videos and films simplify the teaching methodology books are necessary to develop reading skills. On the one hand, the computer and tablets help students to understand the ideas much easier than books. It is very easy to carry a tablet and store the bulk of data. Teachers can share information with students much easier than writing on a blackboard. For instance, a teacher can show the working principle of equipment in a computer and able to share that video to students, this method of teaching ensures that each student understands the working of that equipment and students can easily commemorate the principle by watching those videos in their tablet. It is better to work smarter than hard work. The weight of books is a major issue for a student, he or she is forced to carry a load of books for each subject. Tablets are the simplest solution for this, in Japan schools provide fully loaded tabs in which students can easily note the lectures and record videos. On the other hand, books are easy to handle. Researchers generally prefer paperbacks instead of e-books, it is easy to read and mark the important points in a book. For example, in a survey of pH. D. Students show that 85% of them opted to read a paperback than an e-book. The blue light of the digital screen will make eyesight impairment in the long term run so that studious people prefer paperbacks. To conclude, in this modern era, both books and digital media is necessary for schools. They both help students to learn new ideas and information in a better way.
According to
some
people
, digital media like a computer should supplant
books
in school. I
partially
agree
with this statement, although videos and films simplify the teaching methodology
books
are necessary to develop reading
skills
.

On the one hand, the computer and tablets
help
students
to understand the
ideas
much easier than
books
. It is
very
easy to carry a tablet and store the bulk of data. Teachers can share information with
students
much easier than writing on a blackboard.
For instance
, a teacher can
show
the working principle of equipment in a computer and able to share that video to
students
, this method of teaching ensures that each
student
understands the working of that equipment and
students
can
easily
commemorate the principle by watching those videos in their tablet. It is better to work smarter than
hard
work. The weight of
books
is a major issue for a
student
, he or she
is forced
to carry a load of
books
for each subject. Tablets are the simplest solution for this, in Japan schools provide
fully
loaded tabs in which
students
can
easily
note the lectures and record videos.

On the other hand
,
books
are easy to handle. Researchers
generally
prefer paperbacks
instead
of e-books, it is easy to read and mark the
important
points in a
book
.
For example
, in a survey of pH. D.
Students
show
that 85% of them opted to read a paperback than an e-book. The blue light of the digital screen will
make
eyesight impairment in the long term run
so
that studious
people
prefer paperbacks.

To conclude
, in this modern era, both
books
and digital media is necessary for schools. They both
help
students
to learn new
ideas
and information in a better way.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
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