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It can be quite difficult to learn a new language What do you think are the most difficult aspects of learning a new language v.1

It can be quite difficult to learn a new language What do you think are the most difficult aspects of learning a new language v. 1
Since the introduction of technology and different nations’ keen demand to interact with each other and benefit from the cutting edge innovations, learning foreign languages as a means of communication with other countries would be inevitable. People all over the world are making a lot of efforts to learn different languages besides their native language to achieve their economic and cultural goals or even to assuage their penchant for learning their favorable language. Otherwise, this task would not seem very easy or without difficulties, and obviously based on people’s age and their interest in a specific language they might face various problems. Undoubtedly, one of the fundamental obstacles while learning other languages would be memorizing new words. To begin making sentences anyone requires a considerable number of words including nouns, adjectives, verbs, and adverbs in his mind to have the capability of creating sentences. This prerequisite sometimes would be demanding and time consuming for people especially who are older and less engaged in mental activities. For instance, it is stated that very young children are apt to learn languages besides their maternal language more easily and quickly than others. This memorizing issue could be intensified when it comes to learning the idioms which always do not follow regular and rational grammatical patterns contrary to the ordinary sentences. Therefore, there would be no logical way of recalling such these phrases. Furthermore, one critical issue which might adversely influence the essential people‘s intention of learning other languages, having the chance of communicating worldwide, would be weakness in speaking fluently in foreign languages. A great number of people although possessing a wide range of vocabulary and phrases and being aware of their various meanings and usages in distinct sentences, they suffer from disability of bringing them into speech. In other words, sometimes due to their fear of making mistakes or some psychological disorders such as shyness or lack of self-confidence, they would not be able of utilizing their knowledge to speak fluently. Finally, it can be concluded that according to people’s personal features or mental limitations related to their age, they might have some difficulties in learning new languages. Some effective recommendation could be that they ought to listen to radio and television programs in foreign languages to extend the spectrum of their words and acquire knowledge about how to apply them properly. In addition, speaking with native people would provide the opportunity of improving their fluency and feeling convenient while talking.
Since the introduction of technology and
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different
nations’ keen demand to interact with each
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other
and benefit from the cutting edge innovations,
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learning
foreign
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languages
as a means of communication with
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other
countries would be inevitable.
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People
all over the world are making
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a lot of
efforts to learn
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different
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languages
besides
their native
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language
to achieve their economic and cultural goals or even to assuage their penchant for
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learning
their favorable
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language
.
Otherwise
, this task would not seem
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very
easy or without difficulties, and
obviously
based on
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people’s
age and their interest in a specific
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language
they might face various problems.

Undoubtedly
, one of the fundamental obstacles while
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learning
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other
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languages
would be memorizing new words. To
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begin
making
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sentences
anyone requires a considerable number of words including nouns, adjectives, verbs, and adverbs in his mind to have the capability of creating
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sentences
. This prerequisite
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sometimes
would be demanding and
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time consuming
for
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people
especially
who are older and less engaged in mental activities.
For instance
, it
is stated
that
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very
young children are apt to learn
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languages
besides
their maternal
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language
more
easily
and
quickly
than others. This memorizing issue could
be intensified
when it
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comes
to
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learning
the idioms which always do not follow regular and rational grammatical patterns contrary to the ordinary
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sentences
.
Therefore
, there would be no logical way of recalling such these phrases.

Furthermore
, one critical issue which might
adversely
influence the essential
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people‘s
intention of
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learning
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other
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languages
, having the chance of communicating worldwide, would be weakness in speaking
fluently
in foreign
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languages
. A great number of
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people
although possessing a wide range of vocabulary and phrases and being aware of their various meanings and usages in distinct
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sentences
, they suffer from disability of bringing them into speech. In
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other
words,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
due to their fear of making mistakes or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
psychological disorders such as shyness or lack of self-confidence, they would not be able of utilizing their knowledge to speak
fluently
.

Finally
, it can
be concluded
that according to
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people’s
personal features or mental limitations related to their age, they might have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
difficulties in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
effective recommendation could be that they ought to listen to radio and television programs in foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
to extend the spectrum of their words and acquire knowledge about how to apply them
properly
.
In addition
, speaking with native
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
would provide the opportunity of improving their fluency and feeling convenient while talking.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay It can be quite difficult to learn a new language What do you think are the most difficult aspects of learning a new language v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
409 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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