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Some students like to work in groups with other students when doing assignments and projects. Other students prefer to work independently. Which do you prefer? v.2

Some students like to work in groups with other students when doing assignments and projects. Other students prefer to work independently. Which do you prefer? v. 2
Students’ assignments whether in school or university could be one the most important practices for the students to construct their habitual behaviors and manners in any course of action. They will learn how conduct their duties and responsibilities in groups and with the help of others or merely based on their own abilities. Although carrying out projects by cooperation with others provides the opportunity of benefiting from group working, doing assignment alone carries some beneficial lessons such as independency for the students. The following essay deals with the reasons supporting this point of view. Undoubtedly, some projects are determined by the teachers to be done in groups not only to help the students get acquainted with cooperation but also to divide the different responsibilities between students and optimize the productivity. One the main importance of doing work in groups would be learning to put up with different characteristics of people and make a lot of efforts to compromise and move towards the ultimate goal. Therefore, doing projects with others contribute to real practices of students’ serious careers in future. In addition, they learn how to allocate various types of works to different people based on their knowledge and profession to end up with the best results. However, there are some occupations which do not require working in groups and even they would be accomplished more efficiently if done by individuals. Some professions such as works done by artists and sometimes by innovative scientists need to be done in solitude in order to provide a peaceful environment for evoking their creativity and comforting their contemplation. Furthermore, people should be capable of conducting their personal careers or in case of emergency their other responsibilities without aid of others. In other words, it would be an essential factor in everyone’s life to be independent. Fulfilling some specific assignment independently would help the students to grow autonomous and get ready to take responsibilities without reliance on others. Finally, it can be concluded that besides the necessary lessons imbedded in doing projects in groups, the benefits of learning how to do some careers individually should be taken into consideration.
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Students’
assignments whether in school or university could be
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one
the most
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important
practices for the
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students
to construct their habitual behaviors and manners in any course of action. They will learn how conduct their duties and
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responsibilities
in
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groups
and with the
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help
of others or
merely
based on their
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own
abilities. Although carrying out
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projects
by cooperation with others provides the opportunity of benefiting from
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group
working,
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doing
assignment alone carries
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some
beneficial lessons such as
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independency
for the
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students
. The following essay deals with the reasons supporting this point of view.

Undoubtedly
,
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some
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projects
are determined
by the teachers to
be done
in
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groups
not
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only
to
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help
the
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students
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get
acquainted with cooperation
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but
also
to divide the
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different
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responsibilities
between
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students
and optimize the productivity. One the main importance of
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doing
work in
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groups
would be learning to put up with
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different
characteristics of
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people
and
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make
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a lot of
efforts to compromise and
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move
towards the ultimate goal.
Therefore
,
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doing
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projects
with others contribute to real practices of
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students’
serious careers
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in future
.
In addition
, they learn how to allocate various types of works to
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different
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people
based on their knowledge and profession to
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end
up with the best results.

However
, there are
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some
occupations which do not require working in
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groups
and even they would
be accomplished
more
efficiently
if done by individuals.
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Some
professions such as works done by artists and
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sometimes
by innovative scientists need to
be done
in solitude in order to provide a peaceful environment for evoking their creativity and comforting their contemplation.
Furthermore
,
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people
should be capable of conducting their personal careers or in case of emergency their
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other
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responsibilities
without aid of others. In
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other
words, it would be an essential factor in everyone’s life to be independent. Fulfilling
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some
specific assignment
independently
would
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help
the
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students
to grow autonomous and
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get
ready to take
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responsibilities
without reliance on others.

Finally
, it can
be concluded
that
besides
the necessary lessons
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imbedded
in
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doing
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projects
in
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groups
, the benefits of learning how to do
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some
careers
individually
should
be taken
into consideration.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some students like to work in groups with other students when doing assignments and projects. Other students prefer to work independently. Which do you prefer? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
354 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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