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It can be quite difficult to learn a new language. What do you think are the most difficult aspects of learning a new language? v.1

It can be quite difficult to learn a new language. What do you think are the most difficult aspects of learning a new language? v. 1
There is no doubt that nowadays people live in a modern world where individuals are able to find almost any kind work. Personally, I think that exchange programmes for students are quite beneficial for universities and young citizens as well. In fact, I feel this way for two reasons that I will explore in the following essay. Firstly, in such cases a person is able to gain additional knowledge from a new place. Basically, there are plenty of unknown things in foreign countries for overseas students, but several aspects such as culture and specific work experience are the most important. One should note here that traditions, customs and unique features of different areas have a great influence, because they broaden people’s mind. What is more, unique knowledge from other universities and huge companies gives a bunch of valuable experience for future life and work. As a result, an exchange programme participant is able to become much better with the vital and specific information from abroad institutes. Secondly, the university itself can receive some benefits. To be more specific, visitors from other countries that do studies can be teachers as well. For instance, in my country all institutions of tertiary education organise the English language classes that are compulsory for everybody, so foreigners can replace local tutors for a while and teach this subject as native speakers. Consequently, it would be extremely attractive for new students and teachers, because of new skills and abilities that they would be able to get from it. To draw the conclusion, I am of the opinion that international exchange programmes can provide plenty benefits for participants and companies as well.
There is no doubt that nowadays
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people
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live
in a modern world where individuals are
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able
to find almost any kind work.
Personally
, I
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think
that exchange
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programmes
for students are quite beneficial for universities and young citizens
as well
. In fact, I feel this way for two reasons that I will explore in the following essay.

Firstly
, in such cases a person is
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able
to gain additional knowledge from a new place.
Basically
, there are
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plenty
of unknown things in foreign countries for overseas students,
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but
several aspects such as culture and specific work experience are the most
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important
. One should note here that traditions, customs and unique features of
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different
areas have a great influence,
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because
they broaden
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people
’s mind.
What is more
, unique knowledge from other universities and huge
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companies
gives a bunch of valuable experience for future life and work.
As a result
, an exchange
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programme
participant is
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able
to become much better with the vital and specific information from abroad institutes.

Secondly
, the university itself can receive
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some
benefits. To be more specific, visitors from other countries that do studies can be teachers
as well
.
For instance
, in my country all institutions of tertiary education
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organise
the English language classes that are compulsory for everybody,
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so
foreigners can replace local tutors for a while and teach this subject as native speakers.
Consequently
, it would be
extremely
attractive for new students and teachers,
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because
of new
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skills
and abilities that they would be
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able
to
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get
from it.

To draw the conclusion, I am of the opinion that international exchange
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programmes
can provide
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plenty
benefits for participants and
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companies
as well
.
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IELTS essay It can be quite difficult to learn a new language. What do you think are the most difficult aspects of learning a new language? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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