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Is technology limiting creativity? Discuss your opinion v.1

Is technology limiting creativity? Discuss your opinion v. 1
There is no doubt that the rise in living standards throughout the last decade not only provide us with enormous benefits, but also fuels several severe matters, particularly technology problems. While many individuals hold the idea that high-tech limit our creativity, I strongly advocate with the opposite viewpoint that modern machine can enrich our creative ability. The following paragraphs will be my detailed explanation about my perspective. More specifically, there are many opponents state that because modern technology helps us in finishing tasks, we become dependent and unable to create new things. It is apparent that the technical machine assists us with basic chores; however, it also enables us to make things original. More specifically, due to the dramatic development in technology, people can benefit from it, raging from usual duties to innovative ideas. Therefore, the more technology grows, the more opportunities are given to fulfil our creative ambitions in one field. Filmmakers, for instance, rely on high-tech to create new filming techniques with different, unique angles. On the other hand, there is an argument advanced by opponents that high-tech, sometimes give us unrealistic expectation. However, when it comes to reality, we have to admit that technology helps turn our ambitious ideas into useful objects, which can enhance human creativity. In other words, modern machine makes our dream come true, provides us with more chances to develop more innovative things from that. With high-technology, manufacturers can measure, generalize figures to come to a conclusion about improving their traditional products for new customers, for example. In a nutshell, although several people still claim that technology does not help our imagination, because of our dependence and false expectations. From my perspective, I still prefer the viewpoint that high-technology enables us with a more creative ability based on its given chances for us and its capacity of turning ideas into real things.
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only
provide us with enormous benefits,
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but
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technology
problems. While
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many
individuals hold the
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idea
that high-tech limit our creativity, I
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advocate with the opposite viewpoint that modern machine can enrich our creative ability. The following paragraphs will be my detailed explanation about my perspective.

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specifically
, there are
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many
opponents state that
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modern
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technology
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helps
us in finishing tasks, we become dependent and unable to create new things. It is apparent that the technical machine assists us with basic chores;
however
, it
also
enables us to
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make
things original. More
specifically
, due to the dramatic development in
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technology
,
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people
can benefit from it, raging from usual duties to innovative
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ideas
.
Therefore
, the more
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technology
grows, the more opportunities are
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given
to fulfil our creative ambitions in one field. Filmmakers,
for instance
, rely on high-tech to create new filming techniques with
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different
, unique angles.

On the other hand
, there is an argument advanced by opponents that high-tech,
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give us unrealistic expectation.
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, when it
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technology
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helps
turn our ambitious
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ideas
into useful objects, which can enhance human creativity.
In other words
, modern machine
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makes
our dream
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come
true, provides us with more chances to develop more innovative things from that. With high-technology, manufacturers can measure, generalize figures to
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come
to a conclusion about improving their traditional products for new customers,
for example
.

In a nutshell, although several
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people
still
claim that
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technology
does not
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help
our imagination,
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because
of our dependence and false expectations. From my perspective, I
still
prefer the viewpoint that high-technology enables us with a more creative ability based on its
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given
chances for us and its capacity of turning
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ideas
into real things.
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IELTS essay Is technology limiting creativity? Discuss your opinion v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
8
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