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Interviews form the basic selecting criteria for must large companies. However, some people think that interview is not a reliable method or choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree. v.1

Interviews form the basic selecting criteria for must large companies. However, some people think that interview is not a reliable method or choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods. v. 1
Face-to-face interview is the central process to select proper employees in many multinational companies. Although there are several other effective methods, than personal interview for recruitmenting people. I totally agree with given statement and reasons for it will be elaborated in the following paragraphs. Apparently, the chief reason for ineffective interviews is that, interviewers get limited information about an interviewee. In other words, their personal behaviour such as corporation and coordinate with other colleagues which creates conflict in the future. Besides this, there are assessment criteria like cope with competition or loss that becomes a difficult to find out from a few minutes interview. Thus, face-to-face interview is less impressive. Nonetheless, there number of processes which assist the senior authority to take wise discussion. First and foremost, ability test method is the best way to recruit people. To explain in details, the ability test process helps to understand the intellectual level of employees, which aids top level authoritative to select proper candidate for their company. Along with this they get to know about the practice experience which employees having. According to the recent survey has been conducted by Employment work Association reveals that, more than 43% of companies use ability test method, because it helps to company to find the level of understanding capabilities. Secondly, personality discription test is prominent solution to choose employees. This is because the attitude towards achieving personal and professional goals, only this they get clear long vision of employees, but also the job suitable for employees or not. Therefore, IQ test and personality have paramount importance in recruiting process. In conclusion, it is truly said that other selection process are more feasible to select the perfect candidate for the organisation, and I m in the favour to this policy for the dealing with problems in the organisation and their attitude towards their professional life for the sustainable future of the company.
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interview
is the central
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process
to select proper
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employees
in
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many
multinational
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companies
. Although there are several
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other
effective methods,
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than
personal
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interview
for
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recruitmenting
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people
. I
totally
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agree
with
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given
statement and reasons for it will
be elaborated
in the following paragraphs.

Apparently
, the chief reason for ineffective
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interviews
is that, interviewers
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get
limited information about an interviewee. In
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other
words, their personal
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behaviour
such as corporation and coordinate with
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other
colleagues which creates conflict in the future.
Besides
this, there are assessment criteria like cope with competition or loss that becomes a difficult to find out from a few minutes
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interview
.
Thus
, face-to-face
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interview
is less impressive.

Nonetheless, there number of
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processes
which assist the senior authority to take wise discussion.
First
and foremost, ability
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test
method is the best way to recruit
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people
. To
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explain
in
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details
, the ability
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test
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process
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helps
to understand the intellectual level of
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employees
, which aids
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top level
authoritative to select proper candidate for their
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company
. Along with this they
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get
to know about the practice experience which
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employees
having. According to the recent survey has
been conducted
by Employment work Association reveals that, more than 43% of
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companies
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use
ability
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test
method,
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because
it
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helps
to
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company
to find the level of understanding capabilities.
Secondly
, personality
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discription
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test
is prominent solution to choose
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employees
. This is
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because
the attitude towards achieving personal and professional goals,
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only
this they
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get
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clear
long vision of
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employees
,
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but
also
the job suitable for
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employees
or not.
Therefore
, IQ
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test
and personality have paramount importance in recruiting process.

In conclusion
, it is
truly
said that
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other
selection
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process
are more feasible to select the perfect candidate for the
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organisation
, and I m in the
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favour
to this policy for the dealing with problems in the
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organisation
and their attitude towards their professional life for the sustainable future of the
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company
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Interviews form the basic selecting criteria for must large companies. However, some people think that interview is not a reliable method or choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
316 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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