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Environment problems are too big for individual countries and individual person to address. In other words we have reached the stage where the only way to protect to environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. v.1

Environment problems are too big for individual countries and individual person to address. In other words we have reached the stage where the only way to protect to environment is at an international level. with this opinion. v. 1
The environment issues become a main concern for the government as well as individuals. It is consider that the individual county cannot solve this menace, therefore this problem must be tackle by an international committe. However, I partially agree with the given reasons and reasons for it will be elaborated in the following paragraphs. From my practical point of view, each and every nation should implement stringent rules and regulations for an individual and industries. In other words, authorities enforce the rule of using eco- friendly products which release alleviate pollution level. Besides this the government must give credits system for industries to curtail carbon emissions. For instance, in Japan it is strict rule to solar energy vehicles and equipments which can help to control pollution. This results into their carbon footprints have reduced by 45%. Another factor, people can also help to curb this acute problem. To explain in brief, if masses utilize environmentally friendly products instead of using non biodegradable items such as plastic, that can solve a problem of dumping. Apart from this, eco-friendly commodities can be easily recycled and resue, so it is useful for longer period. Thus, government should imply strict regulations on people, and at same time civilised citizens use eco-friendly goods to solve this problem. Nonetheless, this heating issue is solved on the international ground. This is because, several countries produce a huge emission which creates a problem of climate change. The international climate committee has the set rule for those countries which generates harmful gases from their industrial activities. According to the recent survey conducted by The International committee of climate change reveals that more than 25% of Antarctica ice has melted in the two decades due to gobal warming. The consequences of this problem is that changes in climate, and the plausible solution for this issue is that all nations must decrease their carbon footprints. In conclusion, the world is facing environment related problems which must control at an international level. Although I believe there is equal responsiblty of national and international to handle this pandemic, and that must go in hand in hand for the sustainable future.
The environment issues become a main concern for the
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government
as well
as individuals. It is
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consider
that the individual county cannot solve this menace,
therefore
this
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problem
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must
be tackle by an
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international
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committe
.
However
, I
partially
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agree
with the
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given
reasons and reasons for it will
be elaborated
in the following paragraphs.

From my practical point of view, each and every nation should implement stringent
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rules
and regulations for an individual and industries.
In other words
, authorities enforce the
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rule
of using
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eco
- friendly products which release alleviate pollution level.
Besides
this the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
give credits system for industries to curtail carbon emissions.
For instance
, in Japan it is strict
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rule
to solar energy vehicles and equipments which can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to control pollution. This results into their carbon footprints have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
by 45%. Another factor,
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people
can
also
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help
to curb this acute
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problem
. To
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explain
in brief
, if masses utilize
environmentally
friendly products
instead
of using
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non biodegradable
items such as plastic, that can solve a
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problem
of dumping. Apart from this, eco-friendly commodities can be
easily
recycled and
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resue
,
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so
it is useful for longer period.
Thus
,
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government
should imply strict regulations on
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people
, and at same time
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civilised
citizens
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use
eco-friendly
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goods
to solve this problem.

Nonetheless, this heating issue
is solved
on the
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international
ground. This is
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because
, several countries produce a huge emission which creates a
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problem
of
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climate
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change
. The
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international
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climate
committee has the set
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rule
for those countries which generates harmful gases from their industrial activities. According to the recent survey conducted by The
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International
committee of
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climate
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change
reveals that more than 25% of Antarctica ice has melted in the two decades due to
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gobal
warming. The consequences of this
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problem
is that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
in
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climate
, and the plausible solution for this issue is that all nations
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
decrease their carbon footprints.

In conclusion
, the world is facing environment related
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problems
which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
control at an
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international
level. Although I believe there is equal
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responsiblty
of national and
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international
to handle this pandemic, and that
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must
go
This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only "in hand".
in hand in hand
for the sustainable future.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS essay Environment problems are too big for individual countries and individual person to address. In other words we have reached the stage where the only way to protect to environment is at an international level. with this opinion. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
357 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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