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Internet has become major source of information for students. Do you think in the near future intenet will replace the need of books? Discuss your opinion giving reasons and examples. v.2

Internet has become major source of information for students. Do you think in the near future intenet will replace the need of books? Discuss your opinion giving reasons and examples. v. 2
There has been an immense advancement in the technology in most aspects of pupils life especially in the availability of internet. Nowadays has become a poplular and significant source of information for students. There is always a question of consideration about the internet replacing the books. In my opinion, there is a no possibility of books being replaced with the internet. this essay will present supporting ideas and state some examples as well. Education has changed its dynamics dramatically. With regards to the studying online, students usually prefer to resort to online information because of numerous reasons. firstly, students can access the internet anywhere without much hustle. it is handy, can be used on mobile phones or laptops to search any topic or clear he doubts. it does not need the consultation of a teacher. Secondly, some students cannot afford books because of the huge amounts of the price tag. For example, in India, some medical students from poor families can not afford some of the books such as the book of medicine by Davidson, which coss about 35, 00 Rupees. Therefore they prefer online e-book at a very low subscription price. Internet proves to be a primary source of information for such students. However, Plagiarism is an important aspect of the use of the internet. Faux information could affect the knowledge of an individual badly. Information provided on the sites can be amended, therefore the majority of people does not rely on the information provided by the internet and hence, resort to books only. Books play a crucial role in the lives of people because the information given in the books is straightforward and precise. furthermore, there are substantial novels and journals which cannot be replaced or amended. therefore people rely more on such books. In addition, students living in rural areas does not have the access to the internet, because of the lack of amenities such as internet connectivity towers. Hence, in such areas books are the only best source of information. Moreover, books always have been the best friend of an individual. Reading books instead of online information is still on trend. In conclusion, books play a very vital rule in everyone' s life. Some people use books as a hobby while, for many other books are the only source of information for acquiring knowledge. use of books by people can never be forgotten or replaced with any other source. Nevertheless, books cannot be substituted by any means.
There has been an immense advancement in the technology in most aspects of pupils life
especially
in the availability of internet. Nowadays has become a
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poplular
and significant
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source
of
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information
for
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students
. There is always a question of consideration about the internet replacing the
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books
. In my opinion, there is a no possibility of
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books
being replaced
with the internet.
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this
essay will present supporting
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ideas
and state
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some
examples
as well
.

Education has
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changed
its dynamics
dramatically
.
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the studying
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online
,
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students
usually
prefer to resort to
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online
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information
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because
of numerous reasons.
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firstly
,
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students
can access the internet anywhere without much hustle.
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it
is handy, can be
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used
on mobile phones or laptops to search any topic or
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clear
he doubts.
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it
does not need the consultation of a teacher.
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,
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some
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students
cannot afford
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books
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because
of the huge amounts of the price tag.
For example
, in India,
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some
medical
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students
from poor families can not afford
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some of the
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books
such as the
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book
of medicine by Davidson, which
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coss
about 35, 00 Rupees.
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Therefore
they prefer
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online
e-book at a
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very
low subscription price. Internet proves to be a primary
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source
of
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information
for such students.

However
, Plagiarism is an
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important
aspect of the
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use
of the internet. Faux
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information
could affect the knowledge of an individual
badly
.
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Information
provided on the sites can
be amended
,
therefore
the majority of
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people
does not rely on the
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information
provided by the internet and
hence
, resort to
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books
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only
.
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Books
play a crucial role in the
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lives
of
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people
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because
the
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information
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given
in the
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books
is straightforward and precise.
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furthermore
, there are substantial novels and journals which cannot
be replaced
or amended.
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therefore
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people
rely more on such
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books
.
In addition
,
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students
living in rural areas does not have the access to the internet,
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because
of the lack of amenities such as internet connectivity towers.
Hence
, in such areas
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books
are the
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only
best
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source
of
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information
.
Moreover
,
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books
always have been the best friend of an individual. Reading
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books
instead
of
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online
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information
is
still
on trend.

In conclusion
,
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books
play a
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very
vital
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rule
in
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people
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use
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books
as a hobby while, for
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many
other
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books
are the
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only
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source
of
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information
for acquiring knowledge.
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use
of
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books
by
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people
can never
be forgotten
or replaced with any other
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source
.
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,
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books
cannot
be substituted
by any means.
22Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
47Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes
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IELTS essay Internet has become major source of information for students. Do you think in the near future intenet will replace the need of books? Discuss your opinion giving reasons and examples. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
411 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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