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International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. v.8

International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? v. 8
With the advent of the internet, users nowadays can easily access a massive amount of information just by a click on the button. Nevertheless, some people assert that the heavy reliance on the internet for information would bring more harm than good. From my perspective, I would argue that it has benefits and drawbacks in equal measures. On the bright side, we cannot deny the importance of the internet in terms of providing information. It contains an inexhaustible supply of information and knowledge on almost any subject, which can help people clarify queries and get a better understanding of a specific topic. In other words, the internet is a virtual treasure trove of information. Moreover, it is incontestable that the internet offers the fastest and most convenient way of searching for information. In the digital era, for anyone having access to technological devices and internet connection, it only takes a fraction of a second to find all kinds of information via various authentic websites. For instance, by browsing some study websites, students can gather lots of valuable materials and academic knowledge for research purpose, which consumes less time than finding a book in a library. On the dark side, we cannot turn a blind eye to its demerits either. One of them is the unreliability of the online information. Since everyone can spread false rumours, unverifiable data and erroneous information freely without doing any research or understanding the criticality of a situation, people may fall prey to misinformation and scams. Besides, it is also possible for children come across a great deal of offensive and obscene content in the form of advertisement while surfing the internet. However, these problems would be minimized efficiently by cautiously checking the authenticity beforehand as well as implementing an internet usage policy. In conclusion, it can be confidently conveyed that, although there are undeniable disadvantages when using the internet as a source of information, these do not overshadow the associated advantages. It is one’s responsibility to draw a line between correct and incorrect usage of it.
With the advent of the internet, users nowadays can
easily
access a massive amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
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just
by a click on the button.
Nevertheless
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
assert that the heavy reliance on the internet for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
would bring more harm than
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
. From my perspective, I would argue that it has benefits and drawbacks in equal measures.

On the bright side, we cannot deny the importance of the internet in terms of providing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
. It contains an inexhaustible supply of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
and knowledge on almost any subject, which can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
clarify queries and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a better understanding of a specific topic.
In other words
, the internet is a virtual treasure trove of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
.
Moreover
, it is incontestable that the internet offers the fastest and most convenient way of searching for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
. In the digital era, for anyone having access to technological devices and internet connection, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
takes a fraction of a second to find all kinds of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
via various authentic websites.
For instance
, by browsing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
study websites, students can gather lots of valuable materials and academic knowledge for research purpose, which consumes less time than finding a book in a library.

On the dark side, we cannot turn a blind eye to its demerits either. One of them is the unreliability of the online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
. Since everyone can spread false
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rumours
, unverifiable data and erroneous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
freely
without doing any research or understanding the criticality of a situation,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
may fall prey to misinformation and scams.
Besides
, it is
also
possible for children
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
across a great deal of offensive and obscene content in the form of advertisement while surfing the internet.
However
, these problems would
be minimized
efficiently
by
cautiously
checking the authenticity beforehand
as well
as implementing an internet usage policy.

In conclusion
, it can be
confidently
conveyed that, although there are undeniable disadvantages when using the internet as a source of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
, these do not overshadow the associated advantages. It is one’s responsibility to draw a line between correct and incorrect usage of it.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
341 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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