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International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and an intrusion into the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economical form of education in addition to spreading ideas, language and culture. v.9

International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and an intrusion into the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economical form of education in addition to spreading ideas, language and culture. v. 9
In the current world, international marketing is certainly believed as an introducing an illegal aspect into the economy of the host country. However, it is often considered by some that such type of marketing is significant for the economic form of knowledge as well as exchanging diverse culture, languages and customs. In my opinion, I strongly believe that international marketing promotes globalisation by opening new opportunities in future business and thus improve economic growth. International marketing has several advantages. Firstly, enhancing economic growth of the country would often be promoted by global marketing. In other words, it certainly opens new doors for future business. For instance, recent studies show that there should certainly a considerable growth in the field of international trade in electronic gadgets from countries such as Russia and China. In addition, International marketing often explores inner talent of citizens across the globe. Moreover, improving the brand reputation of the product would certainly have another plus point of the international business because product brands often gain reputation and popularity across the world. Multinational banks often attained reputation in the current scenario. Hence, local brands of the country would probably become familiar across the world by international marketing. Furthermore, spreading of ideas, customs, tradition and language would often possible by global trade, thus spreading diverse culture throughout the world. World food products in popular supermarkets such as Tesco and Asda would often show an example of global business networks, therefore, introducing global food into the country’s local trade market. In conclusion, international marketing should be promoted through the world for improving economic knowledge as well promoting different culture worldwide. Such promotion of international marketing should often possible without interrupting nation own local culture and trade by making awareness among citizen about its advantages.
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believed as an introducing an illegal aspect into the economy of the host
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country
.
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, it is
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often
considered by
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some
that such type of
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marketing
is significant for the
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economic
form of knowledge
as well
as exchanging diverse
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culture
, languages and customs. In my opinion, I
strongly
believe that
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international
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marketing
promotes
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globalisation
by opening new opportunities in future
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business
and
thus
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improve
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economic
growth.

International
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marketing
has several advantages.
Firstly
, enhancing
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economic
growth of the
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country
would
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often
be promoted
by
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global
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marketing
.
In other words
, it
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certainly
opens new doors for future
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business
.
For instance
, recent studies
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show
that there should
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certainly
a considerable growth in the field of
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international
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trade
in electronic gadgets from
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countries
such as Russia and China.
In addition
,
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International
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marketing
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often
explores inner talent of citizens across the globe.

Moreover
, improving the brand reputation of the product would
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certainly
have another plus point of the
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international
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business
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because
product brands
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often
gain reputation and popularity across the
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world
. Multinational banks
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often
attained reputation in the
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current
scenario.
Hence
, local brands of the
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country
would
probably
become familiar across the
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world
by
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international
marketing.

Furthermore
, spreading of
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ideas
, customs, tradition and language would
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often
possible by
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global
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trade
,
thus
spreading diverse
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culture
throughout the
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world
.
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food products in popular supermarkets such as
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Tesco
and
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Asda
would
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often
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show
an example of
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business
networks,
therefore
, introducing
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food into the
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country’s
local
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trade
market.

In conclusion
,
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international
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marketing
should
be promoted
through the
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world
for improving
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economic
knowledge
as well
promoting
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different
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culture
worldwide. Such promotion of
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international
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marketing
should
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often
possible without interrupting nation
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own
local
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culture
and
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trade
by making awareness among citizen about its advantages.
18Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
59Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and an intrusion into the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economical form of education in addition to spreading ideas, language and culture. v. 9

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
294 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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