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With the recent development in technology like e-books some people feel that the printed media like books, newspapers and magazine will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that those forms of media will never disappear. v.2

With the recent development in technology like e-books some people feel that the printed media like books, newspapers and magazine will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that those forms of media will never disappear. v. 2
In contrast, it can never be denied that e-books are reading materials which are handy and convenient. The procurement of information is at the convenience for most families because electronic references can be shared trough internet. The internet has various websites that have updated information. These recent data can be easily accessed by downloading in a form of electronic book. Secondly, information saved in a computer is not easily deteriorated because the data are displayed on the screen. It cannot be torn nor crumpled, and can indefinitely reproduce in multiple copies. For instance, the computer has a system that retains the file and can proliferate in a large number of copies. In my opinion, I argue that the longevity of journals, literary and ideas on paper will survive in spite of existing e-books and online information.    It can be questioned that daily exposure to computer screens or computer books, which emits little radiation, may damage the reader’s eyes. Some people who are less affluent may not have computers their residences, thus it is futile that they will alter the traditional mode of acquiring ideas. Overall, some are convinced that readable information on computers will eradicate encoded conventional publications. However, it is undisputable that these paper editing will always remain despite the modern development.
In contrast
, it can never
be denied
that e-books are reading materials which are handy and convenient. The procurement of
information
is at the convenience for most families
because
electronic references can
be shared
trough internet. The internet has various websites that have updated
information
. These recent data can be
easily
accessed by downloading in a form of electronic book.
Secondly
,
information
saved in a computer is not
easily
deteriorated
because
the data
are displayed
on the screen. It cannot
be torn
nor crumpled, and can
indefinitely
reproduce in multiple copies.
For instance
, the computer has a system that retains the file and can proliferate in
a large number of
copies.

In my opinion, I argue that the longevity of journals, literary and
ideas
on paper will survive
in spite of
existing e-books and online
information
.
  
It can
be questioned
that daily exposure to computer screens or computer books, which emits
little
radiation, may damage the reader’s eyes.
Some
people
who are less affluent may not have computers their residences,
thus
it is futile that they will alter the traditional mode of acquiring
ideas
.

Overall
,
some
are convinced
that readable
information
on computers will eradicate encoded conventional publications.
However
, it is undisputable that these paper editing will always remain despite the modern development.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay With the recent development in technology like e-books some people feel that the printed media like books, newspapers and magazine will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that those forms of media will never disappear. v. 2

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  American English
3 paragraphs
214 words
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