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International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and an intrusion into the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economical form of education in addition to spreading ideas, language and culture. v.10

International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and an intrusion into the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economical form of education in addition to spreading ideas, language and culture. v. 10
The world has become a small global village due to the increasing international trade opportunity. As this facilitates numerous people to earn their bread and butter, avail global products in a marketplace, creates more opportunity for trade and marketing, and demolish monopoly in business, this is spreading faster than ever before. However, there are some who opine that international marketing is like an encroachment to a country’s own trade, policy, tradition, culture and freedom. In my view, international marketing really benefits the masses and offer countless advantages. Many prominent reasons are present for my opinion. First and foremost, international marketing enhances the relationship among nations as it invites other countries to invest and do business. This is beneficial for making a stronger bonding among nations. For example, many Asian countries now have a better relationship with Western countries due to the open international market. Secondly, international marketing provides everything for the commonality, even those things which they can not buy from their local market. Consumers, these days, have many choices and they can pick from many international brands. Third, this phenomenon offers better product quality at a competitive price. For example, we can get products from different brands in our local market easily these days and if I personally compare the prices of many of these products with the past, it has dropped due to the increasing competition.   Another significant benefit it offers is the reachability of our local products  in the international market. As every garden has weeds so as with the international marketing. Many local traders and the vendors face difficulties because they often fail to attract the consumers. The buyers like to go to the international malls and like to purchase the branded items rather than locally made products. In a way, this kills many local businesses. Finally, the international marketing and trade facilities often negatively affect the traditional ways of life and culture. For instance, the traditional Japanese lifestyle and unique culture have greatly been affected by many Western cultures and open market and international market is two of the key reasons for this shift. All in all, it can be enclosed that undoubtedly the world today is a common marketplace for every nation and it is impossible to remain unaffected by the impacts of the international marketing; practically which has more positive than negative consequences.
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small
global village due to the increasing
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international
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trade
opportunity. As this facilitates numerous
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people
to earn their bread and butter, avail global
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products
in a marketplace, creates more opportunity for
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trade
and
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marketing
, and demolish monopoly in business, this is spreading faster than ever
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before
.
However
, there are
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some
who opine that
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international
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is like an encroachment to a
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country’s
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own
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trade
, policy, tradition,
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culture
and freedom. In my view,
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international
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marketing
really
benefits the masses and offer countless advantages.

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Many
prominent reasons are present for my opinion.
First
and foremost,
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international
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marketing
enhances the relationship among nations as it invites other
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countries
to invest and do business. This is beneficial for making a stronger bonding among nations.
For example
,
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many
Asian
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countries
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now
have a better relationship with Western
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countries
due to the open
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international
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market
.
Secondly
,
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international
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marketing
provides everything for the commonality, even those things which they can not
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buy
from their
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local
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market
. Consumers, these days, have
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many
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choices and
they can pick from
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international
brands. Third, this phenomenon offers better
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product
quality at a competitive price.
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, we can
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get
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products
from
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different
brands in our
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local
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market
easily
these days and if I
personally
compare the prices of
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of these
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products
with the past, it has dropped due to the increasing competition.
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Another significant benefit it offers is the
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reachability
of our
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local
products
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in the
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international
market.

As every garden has weeds
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so
as with the
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international
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.
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local
traders and the vendors face difficulties
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because
they
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often
fail to attract the consumers. The buyers like to go to the
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international
malls and like to
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purchase
the branded items
rather
than
locally
made
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products
. In a way, this kills
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many
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local
businesses.
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, the
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international
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marketing
and
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trade
facilities
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often
negatively
affect the traditional ways of life and
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culture
.
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, the traditional Japanese lifestyle and unique
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culture
have
greatly
been
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affected
by
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Western
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cultures
and open
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market
and
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international
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market
is two of the key reasons for this shift.

All in all, it can
be enclosed
that
undoubtedly
the world
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today
is a common marketplace for every nation and it is impossible to remain unaffected by the impacts of the
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international
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marketing
;
practically
which has more
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positive
than
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49Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and an intrusion into the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economical form of education in addition to spreading ideas, language and culture. v. 10

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
391 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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