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Independent speaking (question 1)Where would you most like to live? Describe this place and explain why you would like to live there. v.1

Independent speaking (question 1)Where would you most like to live? Describe this place and explain why you would like to live there. v. 1
It is accepted that recent medical advancement and other medicinal products are normally tested on animals before they are used in human bodies. Although some people believe that animal experimentation should be able to prohibit because it is ethically undesirable, others criticize that it gains dramatic profits to humans. On the one hand, the advocates of animal experimentation say that testing on animals is possible for medical research and other products experimenting. Animal trials enable researchers to test an appropriate dose of medication that people can obtain and ensure about human’s safety and survival. A common example for this case is that many scientists initially analyse medicinal products and additional substances that are essential to humans on animals, protecting therapeutic overdosing which creates harmful side effects to humans. That is why this determines the drug security before testing on humans. On the other hand, some opponents may argue that analysing animals is restricted. Firstly, animal examination is cruelly tortured due to the fact that not only this causes a significant pain on animals but also reduces the number of animals in the world. Moreover, some experiments on animals potentially deliver improper results in order that investigators are not able to trust the results that originate from animals because of the difference between animals and humans in physical and mental properties. Therefore, animal observation is not possible for providing precise outcomes. For all the above reasons, there are convincing arguments both for and against animal investigation. Although it possibly increases people's benefits, I strongly believe that experimenting on animals should be discontinued to prevent animal’s immorality.
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accepted
that recent medical advancement and
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other
medicinal products are
normally
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tested
on
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animals
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before
they are
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used
in
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human
bodies. Although
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some
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people
believe that
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animal
experimentation should be able to prohibit
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because
it is
ethically
undesirable, others criticize that it gains dramatic profits to humans.

On the one hand, the advocates of
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animal
experimentation say that testing on
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animals
is possible for medical research and
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other
products experimenting.
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Animal
trials enable researchers to
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test
an appropriate dose of medication that
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people
can obtain and ensure about
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human’s
safety and survival. A common example for this case is that
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many
scientists
initially
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analyse
medicinal products and additional substances that are essential to
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humans
on
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animals
, protecting therapeutic overdosing which creates harmful side effects to
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humans
.
That is
why this determines the drug security
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before
testing on humans.

On the
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other
hand,
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some
opponents may argue that
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analysing
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animals
is restricted
.
Firstly
,
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animal
examination is
cruelly
tortured due to the fact that not
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only
this causes a significant pain on
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animals
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but
also
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reduces
the number of
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animals
in the world.
Moreover
,
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some
experiments on
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animals
potentially
deliver improper results in order that investigators are not able to trust the results that originate from
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animals
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because
of the difference between
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animals
and
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humans
in physical and mental properties.
Therefore
,
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animal
observation is not possible for providing precise outcomes.

For all the above reasons, there are convincing arguments both for and against
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animal
investigation. Although it
possibly
increases
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people
's benefits, I
strongly
believe that experimenting on
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animals
should
be discontinued
to
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prevent
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animal’s
immorality.
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IELTS essay Independent speaking (question 1)Where would you most like to live? Describe this place and explain why you would like to live there. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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