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In your opinion, which modern invention or scientific discovery has affected society the most? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.2

In your opinion, which modern invention or scientific discovery has affected society the most? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2
What modern invention has the biggest effect on the way people live today? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. ” Necessity if the mother of all invention. It was the need to stay connected with friends/relatives near or far and to ensure alost immediate message delivery that led to the invention of telephone; however it is only human to want more, and thus to have real time communication gave birth to INTERNET. Today in this fast paced world, internet has become so pervasie that some refer to it as the fourth necessary thing to survive after food, clothes and shelter! If we have need some information, we rely on the internet, if we need to go somewhere, our plans comes to a standstill if there is no internet- they way internet has impacted how we live today has been further elucidated inthe following paragraphs. The very ritual of reading the physical copy of newspaper has been replaced by skimming through headlines on a galore of Mobile apps. We prefer flipping through articles on FlipBoard or reading saved articles from Pocket app at leisure. Internat has thus changed the way we read news; everything that is hapening around the world is at our fingertips. One seldom watches the news on TV for breaking news, but instead gets live tweets on the phone. Not only this, Internet has revolutionised the way we commute; there are no more scenarios of haggling for the right fare with the cab/auto driver; we no longer have to look for friends or colleagues or relatives to car pool. Apps like Uber/OLA/Lyft make cab booking so easy and convenient that at times one doesnt really need to buy a car; wherever you want to go you can book a ride using these apps which give you multiple options to choose from. Not only this, thanks to internet, we can go anywhere in the world, and google information about local taxis as well incase an app doesn' t provide service there. Further, we seldom see long queues at any sort of ticket counter these days- be it train, movie, or bus or flight, everything is online- we can book a ticket when we want and wherever we want; simply logon to the internet nd choose the ticket that you want, and lo behold it is done within a matter or few minutes. Through online shopping, internet has changed the way we shop; through more secure and robust networks, it has transformed the banking industry - internet is one of the modern invention that in my opinion has had the biggest effect on people today. The aformentioned paradigms highlight only few of the many areas that have been affected by the internet, as highlighted it has become as essential as the basic needs to survive.
What modern invention has the biggest effect on the way
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people
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today
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Use
specific reasons and examples to support your choice. ”

Necessity if the mother of all invention. It was the
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need
to stay connected with friends/relatives near or far and to ensure
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alost
immediate message delivery that led to the invention of telephone;
however
it is
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only
human to
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want
more, and
thus
to have real time communication gave birth to INTERNET.
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Today
in this
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fast
paced world, internet has become
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so
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pervasie
that
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some
refer to it as the fourth necessary thing to survive after food, clothes and shelter! If we have
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need
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some
information, we rely on the internet, if we
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need
to go somewhere, our plans
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comes
to a standstill if there is no internet- they way internet has impacted how we
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live
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today
has been
further
elucidated
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inthe
following paragraphs.

The
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very
ritual of reading the physical copy of newspaper has
been replaced
by skimming through headlines on a galore of Mobile apps. We prefer flipping through articles on
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FlipBoard
or reading saved articles from Pocket app at leisure.
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Internat
has
thus
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changed
the way we read news; everything
that is
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hapening
around the world is at our fingertips. One seldom
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watches
the news on TV for breaking news,
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but
instead
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gets
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live
tweets on the phone.

Not
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only
this, Internet has
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revolutionised
the way we commute; there are no more scenarios of haggling for the right fare with the cab/auto driver; we no longer
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have to
look for friends or colleagues or relatives to car pool. Apps like Uber/OLA/Lyft
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make
cab booking
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so
easy and convenient that at times one
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doesnt
really
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need
to
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buy
a car; wherever you
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want
to go you can book a ride using these apps which give you multiple options to choose from. Not
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only
this, thanks to internet, we can go anywhere in the world, and google information about local taxis
as well
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incase
an app
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doesn&
#039; t provide service there.

Further
, we seldom
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see
long queues at any sort of ticket counter these days- be it train, movie, or bus or flight, everything is online- we can book a ticket when we
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want
and wherever we
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want
;
simply
logon to the internet
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nd
choose the ticket that you
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want
, and lo behold it
is done
within a matter or few minutes.

Through online shopping, internet has
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changed
the way we shop; through more secure and robust networks, it has transformed the banking industry
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-
internet is one of the modern invention that in my opinion has had the biggest effect on
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people
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today
. The
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aformentioned
paradigms highlight
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only
few of the
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many
areas that have been
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affected
by the internet, as highlighted it has become as essential as the basic
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needs
to survive.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS essay In your opinion, which modern invention or scientific discovery has affected society the most? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
468 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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