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some people believe that it is a responsibilities of teachers at school to save the child for a better future when it is the parents responsibility explain your answer with relevant examples v.2

some people believe that it is a responsibilities of teachers at school to save the child for a better future when it is the parents responsibility explain your answer with relevant examples v. 2
The role of parents and teachers in a child' s life cannot explained in words. Both are important to drive the children towards success. Some people have an opinion that, it is teachers' duty to make the child eligible for upcoming future, where others are in the favour of parents. I think, both parents and teachers are necessary to inculcate the moral values in the children' s minds for better future. To begin with, it is a common saying that, parents are the first teachers of their children. They influence the children' s life significantly. Basic skills can only be taught by parents at home, such as, how to greet elders with respect. Moreover, parents have hidden talents to recognise the children' s problem, as they are emotionally attached with them. In addition, parents want well-being of their children. They always try to give best things to them. So, parents make their children strong for hardships of future. Adding to this, teachers also have great place in the lives of children. When children go to school, they do not have knowledge about world or anything else, but teachers foster them to learn new things and make them capable to understand different things at a same time. Furthermore, learning skills of the children can only be flourished in a school under supervision of the teachers. For instance, they learn the methods to solve the problems of mathematics, similarly, their intellectual abilities also developed when they do questioning with educators on particular topic. Further, the teachers are professionally trained to teach the children in different ways. So, these reasons are enough to clear the point that, educators' presence is equally important in the children' s life as parents. In conclusion, both educators and parents are imperative in life of the children as parents teach the children basic things like, interacting with others in adequate way and teachers impart the knowledge of different subjects, which are useful to get desired job in the future.
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important
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children
towards success.
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teachers&
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make
the child eligible for upcoming future, where others are in the
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favour
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parents
. I
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and
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are necessary to inculcate the moral values in the
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children&
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with, it is a common saying that,
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are the
first
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of their
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children
. They influence the
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significantly
. Basic
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skills
can
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only
be taught
by
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parents
at home, such as, how to greet elders with respect.
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,
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have hidden talents to
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the
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children&
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emotionally
attached with them.
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,
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want well-being of their
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children
. They always try to
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give best
things to them.
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,
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parents
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make
their
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children
strong for hardships of future.

Adding to this,
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also
have great place in the
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lives
of
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children
. When
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go to school, they do not have knowledge about world or anything else,
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but
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teachers
foster them to learn new things and
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make
them capable to understand
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different
things at a same time.
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, learning
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skills
of the
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children
can
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only
be flourished
in a school under supervision of the
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teachers
.
For instance
, they learn the methods to solve the problems of mathematics,
similarly
, their intellectual abilities
also
developed when they
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do questioning
with educators on particular topic.
Further
, the
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teachers
are
professionally
trained to teach the
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children
in
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different
ways.
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in the
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children&
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life
as parents.

In conclusion
, both educators and
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parents
are imperative in
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life
of the
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children
as
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parents
teach the
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children
basic things like, interacting with others in adequate way and
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teachers
impart the knowledge of
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different
subjects, which are useful to
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get
desired job in the future.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes

IELTS essay some people believe that it is a responsibilities of teachers at school to save the child for a better future when it is the parents responsibility explain your answer with relevant examples v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
331 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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