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Environmental problem are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with t v.1

Environmental problem are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. with t v. 1
Good manners are the best value added thing that can be given to a child while growing up. A growing child should learn good etiquettes in order to respect everyone in the society. However, negligence during the growth age can cause negative implications in future. I believe that that both, parents and educational institutes, are equally responsible for better up-bringing of a human being. During the growth years, parents play the most important role before a kid is introduced to a learning place. Since till the age of two or three, a child spends most of the time growing up with his parents and family. For example, my son, who is three years old, has recently introduced to a play school, but it was his parents responsibility to educate the basic learnings and manners to him till the age he starts going to such place. However, for later stages, knowledge institutes also plays an important role for good up-bringing. When the young generation is introduced to a new place, where they get to know new people with a completely new environment, the responsibility of knowledge and manners enhancement also comes up on that place. For instance, I will expect my son to learn good manners at school because neither I not my wife would be able to give that much amount of time to him. Thankfully, this multiple pleases of life, let the children groom themselves. In conclusion, both family and learning place are equally important. Parents play a major role during the initial 2-3 years of age; however, schools shares the responsibility later on. It is good that there is a lot of opportunities available these days for children to become a nice human being.
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manners are the best value
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thing that can be
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to a child while growing up. A growing child should learn
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good
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etiquettes
in order to respect everyone in the society.
However
, negligence during the growth
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age
can cause
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negative
implications
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in future
. I believe
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that that
both,
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parents
and educational institutes, are
equally
responsible for better up-bringing of a human being.

During the growth years,
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parents
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play
the most
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important
role
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before
a kid
is introduced
to a learning
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place
. Since till the
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age
of two or three, a child spends most of the time growing up with his
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parents
and family.
For example
, my son, who is three years
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old
, has recently introduced to a
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play
school,
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it was his
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parents
responsibility to educate the basic learnings and manners to him till the
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age
he
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starts
going to such
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place
.
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, for later stages, knowledge institutes
also
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plays
an
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role for
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up-bringing.

When the young generation
is introduced
to a new
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place
, where they
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get
to know new
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people
with a completely new environment, the responsibility of knowledge and manners enhancement
also
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comes
up on that
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place
.
For instance
, I will
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expect
my son to learn
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good
manners at school
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because
neither I not my wife would be able to give that much amount of time to him.
Thankfully
, this multiple
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pleases
of life,
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let
the children groom themselves.

In conclusion
, both family and learning
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place
are
equally
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important
.
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Parents
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play
a major role during the initial 2-3 years of
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age
;
however
, schools shares the responsibility later on. It is
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good
that there is
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a lot of
opportunities available these days for children to become a nice human being.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Environmental problem are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. with t v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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