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In today’s world, many people use mobile phones and the internet to communication with others. This has resulted in the use of new words and different forms of spelling and grammar. Why do you think these changes have happened? Are they positive or negative development? v.1

In today’s world, many people use mobile phones and the internet to communication with others. This has resulted in the use of new words and different forms of spelling and grammar. Why do you think these changes have happened? Are they positive or negative development? v. 1
There have been many changes in the way people communicate over the last 20 years. It is understandable that these changes have affected people’s relationship and many new forms of words, abbreviations, grammatical rules and way of writing have emerged, whether this is a good thing or a bad thing should be justified. In the past, people used to communicate by writing letters and speaking on the phone. However, technology has changed this, and now emails texts and the internet are the most common communication tools, especially for young people. These methods of technology are much faster than the old ones and these means that people write more quickly and communicate more frequently. Unfortunately, the speed of modern communication system has reduced the accuracy of our messages. This is because people make up their own words and abbreviations and some of these can become quite popular. In my hometown, for example, LOL means’ laugh out loud: and children write this and say it. What is more, punctuation may be missing, and people worry less about how they spell words. Yet language change is not necessarily a bad thing. Informal texts and emails are just messages between friends. It does not matter too much how they are written. The important thing is that people can switch to more accurate language when they need. However, if they lose this ability and formal communication becomes too careless, then there will be problems. All in all, I do not think you can stop changing, and you cannot prevent new ways of communicating. On the other hand, it is still necessary to make sure that everyone can appreciate and should have an interest in the past because it has made us what we are now.
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changes
have
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affected
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people’s
relationship and
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rules
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good
thing or a
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thing should
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.

In the past,
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people
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used
to communicate by writing letters and speaking on the phone.
However
, technology has
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changed
this, and
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now
emails texts and the internet are the most common communication tools,
especially
for young
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people
. These methods of technology are much faster than the
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old
ones and these means that
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people
write more
quickly
and communicate more
frequently
. Unfortunately, the speed of modern communication system has
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reduced
the accuracy of our messages. This is
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because
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people
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make
up their
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own
words and abbreviations and
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some
of these can become quite popular. In my hometown,
for example
, LOL means’ laugh out loud: and children write this and say it.
What is more
, punctuation may be missing, and
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people
worry less about how they spell words.
Yet
language
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change
is not
necessarily
a
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bad
thing. Informal texts and emails are
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just
messages between friends. It does not matter too much how they
are written
. The
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important
thing is that
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people
can switch to more accurate language when they need.
However
, if they lose this ability and formal communication becomes too careless, then there will be problems.

All in all, I do not
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think
you can
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stop
changing, and you cannot
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prevent
new ways of communicating.
On the other hand
, it is
still
necessary to
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make
sure that everyone can appreciate and should have an interest in the past
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because
it has made us what we are
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now
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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He who knows no foreign languages knows nothing of his own.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

IELTS essay In today’s world, many people use mobile phones and the internet to communication with others. This has resulted in the use of new words and different forms of spelling and grammar. Why do you think these changes have happened? Are they positive or negative development? v. 1

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
290 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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