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Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. Do you agree or disagree? v.3

Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. v. 3
Nowadays, it has become very common for people to interact with each other by short text messages or by chatting live on computers. Some people claim this will eventually cause death of grammar and spelling. I completely agree with this statement because short messages are being used universally and frequently on everyday basis. Therefore, this wrong interpretation may replace the normal spellings and grammar gradually. Firstly, the usage of this grammatically incorrect short message is not confined to a particular place. People all over the world are comfortable in using these abbreviated messages while online chats or texting. In addition, this problem is not restricted to one language many local languages are also getting affected. There are many words in English, for example love, you, good morning and good night are always used in short forms which are not the standard abbreviations. Hence, when a large population starts using such wrong vocabulary subsequently the actual spelling or grammar will become extinct. Secondly, people use these grammatically wrong messages in routine communication. When a wrong word is used persistently on a daily basis, there is every chance that people will forget the original spelling. Although, these short messages are grammatically incorrect with wrong abbreviations they convey the correct meaning to the opposite person. Therefore, it has become convenient for everyone to use them quite often. Moreover, people who do not have basic knowledge about English language can send brief messages in English via social media so they are bound to learn wrong spellings. For instance, many native English speakers fail in formal examinations of the English language. In conclusion, people all over the world are obsessed with short text messages and they often use them in routine communication. Therefore, it may ultimately result in the demise of spelling and grammar.
Nowadays, it has become
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common for
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people
to interact with each other by
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short
text
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messages
or by chatting
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live
on computers.
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Some
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people
claim this will
eventually
cause death of
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grammar
and spelling. I completely
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agree
with this statement
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because
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short
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messages
are being
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used
universally
and
frequently
on everyday basis.
Therefore
, this
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wrong
interpretation may replace the normal spellings and
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grammar
gradually
.

Firstly
, the usage of this
grammatically
incorrect
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short
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message
is not confined to a particular place.
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People
all over the world are comfortable in using these abbreviated
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messages
while online chats or texting.
In addition
, this problem is not restricted to one language
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many
local languages are
also
getting
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affected
. There are
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many
words in English,
for example
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love
, you,
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good
morning and
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good
night are always
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used
in
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short
forms which are not the standard abbreviations.
Hence
, when a large population
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starts
using such
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wrong
vocabulary
subsequently
the actual spelling or
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grammar
will become extinct.

Secondly
,
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people
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use
these
grammatically
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wrong
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messages
in routine communication. When a
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wrong
word is
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used
persistently
on a daily basis, there is every chance that
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people
will forget the original spelling.
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Although
, these
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short
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messages
are
grammatically
incorrect with
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wrong
abbreviations they convey the correct meaning to the opposite person.
Therefore
, it has become convenient for everyone to
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use
them quite
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often
.
Moreover
,
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people
who do not have basic knowledge about English language can
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send
brief
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messages
in English via social media
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so
they
are bound
to learn
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wrong
spellings.
For instance
,
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many
native English speakers fail in formal examinations of the English language.

In conclusion
,
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people
all over the world
are obsessed
with
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short
text
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messages and
they
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often
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use
them in routine communication.
Therefore
, it may
ultimately
result in the demise of spelling and
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grammar
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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