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Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. Do you agree or disagree? v.2

Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. v. 2
One of the biggest boons of technology is the improvement in the means of communication. Arrival of tools for communication over the internet has really shrunk the world, but has led to debates on whether the text communication happening through such tools result in death of grammar and spelling. I disagree with this thought and explained my views in the following paragraphs Firstly, most of these text messaging applications come with a limit on the number of letters which makes the users focus only on the key message rather than on the correctness in grammar and spelling. For example, Twitter imposes a limit of 140 letters in the message which is too low to compose a message. The same happens with short messaging services provided by the telecom operators and the user have to pay more if they exceed this word limit and hence users have to send only the key part of the message keeping it short. Secondly, this fear has got very little to do with the latest online messaging systems. The restrictions on keeping the instant communication short is there since the time of telegrams. Telegrams also carried similar restrictions and yet helped people send clear and important messages faster. These new forms of online communication are nothing but a digital version of the telegram. In conclusion, using sentences without proper grammar and short forms of words are a necessary evolution for such tools because of these constraints. In places where users do not require an instant response, such as emails, they follow proper grammatical syntaxes and the spellings and hence it need not be considered to be a threat to the language.
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communication
. Arrival of tools for
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communication
over the internet has
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shrunk the world,
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has led to debates on whether the text
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communication
happening through such tools result in death of grammar and spelling. I disagree with this
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thought
and
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explained
my views in the following
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Firstly
, most of these text messaging applications
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come
with a limit on the number of letters which
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makes
the
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users
focus
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only
on the key
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message
rather
than on the correctness in grammar and spelling.
For example
, Twitter imposes a limit of 140 letters in the
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message
which is too low to compose a
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message
. The same happens with short messaging services provided by the telecom operators and the
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user
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have to
pay more if they exceed this word limit and
hence
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users
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have to
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send
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only
the key part of the
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message
keeping it short.

Secondly
, this fear has
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to do with the latest online messaging systems. The restrictions on keeping the instant
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communication
short is there since the time of telegrams. Telegrams
also
carried similar restrictions and
yet
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helped
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people
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send
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clear
and
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important
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messages
faster. These new forms of online
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communication
are nothing
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but
a digital version of the telegram.

In conclusion
, using sentences without proper grammar and short forms of words are a necessary evolution for such tools
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because
of these constraints. In places where
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users
do not require an instant response, such as emails, they follow proper grammatical
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syntaxes
and the spellings and
hence
it need not
be considered
to be a threat to the language.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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Turkish proverb

IELTS essay Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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