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Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. Do you agree or disagree? v.1

Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. v. 1
Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. Do you agree or disagree? In the contemporary era, development in the communication technology provides various ways in order to communicate with others such as Skype chats and Many more. Some people hold the view that it is a cause which dispell the grammar and spelling. I am personally inclined to disagree with the statement. To begin with, people and students use formal language during studying and working. In School pupils are required and it is considered as mandatory to use and organize vocabulary words while communication with friends and writing essays. Hence, this way helps to use new vocabulary words. It helps to improve their academic level and boost understanding. Ergo, text messaging is regarded as a way which to teach new words to people. In addition to this, many workers and employers use formal language during conversation and sending emails CV to others. Sometimes, they type various information in order to send to other workers. Through it, they may well know and aware about grammar rules and spelling. Furthermore when people use certain abbreviations and read some short forms of the words, then it may enhance their understanding eventually boost their performance. Also, it helps to improve reading and writing skill. To recapitulate, it is unacceptable view the it is a cause which destroy the grammar and spelling. Advantages of the text messaging outweighs its disadvantages.
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Communication
through text messaging and
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other
instant forms of online
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communication
are short and basic.
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Some
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people
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think
this will be the death of
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grammar
and spelling. Do you
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agree
or disagree?

In the contemporary era, development in the
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communication
technology provides various ways in order to communicate with others such as Skype chats and
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Many
more.
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Some
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people
hold the view that it is a cause which
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dispell
the
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grammar
and spelling. I am
personally
inclined to disagree with the statement.

To
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begin
with,
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people
and students
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
formal language during studying and working. In School pupils
are required
and it
is considered
as mandatory to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
and organize vocabulary words while
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
with friends and writing essays.
Hence
, this way
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helps
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
new vocabulary words. It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their academic level and boost understanding. Ergo, text messaging
is regarded
as a way which to teach new words to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

In addition
to this,
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many
workers and employers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
formal language during conversation and sending emails CV to others.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Sometimes
, they type various information in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
to
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other
workers. Through it, they may well know and aware about
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grammar
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rules
and spelling.
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Furthermore
when
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
certain abbreviations and read
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
short forms of the words, then it may enhance their understanding
eventually
boost their performance.
Also
, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
reading and writing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
.

To recapitulate, it is unacceptable view
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the it
is a cause which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
destroy
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
grammar
and spelling. Advantages of the text messaging outweighs its disadvantages.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
A new language is a new life.
Persian Proverb

IELTS essay Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
255 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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