These days, people have changed they dress up. As earlier people used to wear their regional dresses which depicted their culture. Some people believe that with westernization people have forgotten their roots as well as their traditional values which connect people with each other.
Firstly, the drastic change since passed in wearing traditional clothes has lost its essence a decade a ago. However, person can never be judged by his or her clothes. Though clothes plays a vital role to explain the reason behind your personality and culture or community you belong to but this cannot be considered to be the sole reason to not adapt the changes around you.
On the other hand if we consider clothing to be the part of our existence, one should never forget his or her roots. The identification people think they carry of their fathers or for fathers comes from the way an person dresses. Clothing also describes unity among the community and this approach is important. Therefore, the increase in change in trend of the way people dress has negatively affected small communities which have now lost their existence. For a instance " kimonos" japan' s traditional dress which now have lost its traditional value these.
However, i have a partial view-point to the statement as with the change in time everything needs to be changed to be survivor of the fittest but every individual should carry the sense of responsibility to put forward the tradition to our next generations to come.
These days,
people
have
changed
they
dress
up.
As
earlier
people
used
to wear their regional
dresses
which depicted their culture.
Some
people
believe that with
westernization
people
have forgotten their roots
as well
as their
traditional
values which connect
people
with each other.
Firstly
, the drastic
change
since passed in wearing
traditional
clothes has lost its essence a decade
a ago
.
However
, person can never
be judged
by
his or her
clothes. Though clothes plays a vital role to
explain
the reason behind your personality and culture or community you belong to
but
this cannot
be considered
to be the sole reason to not adapt the
changes
around you.
On the other hand
if we consider clothing to be the part of our existence, one should never forget
his or her
roots. The identification
people
think
they carry of their fathers or for fathers
comes
from the way
an
person
dresses
. Clothing
also
describes
unity among the community and this approach is
important
.
Therefore
, the increase in
change
in trend of the way
people
dress
has
negatively
affected
small
communities which have
now
lost their existence. For
a
instance
"
;
kimonos"
;
japan&
#039; s
traditional
dress
which
now
have lost its
traditional
value these.
However
,
i
have a partial view-point to the statement as with the
change
in time everything needs to be
changed
to be survivor of the fittest
but
every individual should carry the sense of responsibility to put forward the tradition to our
next
generations to
come
.
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