In the past, people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community? v.1
In the past, people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community? v. 1
Nowadays, most cities and villages have vital public utilities, such as electricity, water, and gas; hence, people can live almost everywhere. However, in the past, there were several places where people could settle. So, rather than living far from people and searching for new opportunities, they used to gather together, making a small community and living together in a so-called small village.
There were definitely some advantages. For example, people who lived in a place which is not populated, knew each other well. This meant that when someone needed help, could easily count on many people. In my opinion, this had led to strong relationships compared with todays modern relationships. It is clear that with the growing popularity of social media, people are less in contact with each other.
On the other hand, like any other issues, there were some drawbacks which made people leave small villages. I believe, people always have a great eagerness to search for new opportunities. To set an example, there are always going to be more job opportunities in big cities rather than small villages. Having a better job with higher salary means a better life in most cases.
In conclusion, there were some reasons why people had to live in small villages in the past. For instance, people could not live wherever they wanted, because resources like water were not available everywhere. Thus, people had to overcome such problems together and they had stronger relationships compared with people living in modern cities. However, lack of improved facilities was one of the main setbacks of living in a village.
Nowadays, most cities and
villages
have vital public utilities, such as electricity, water, and gas;
hence
,
people
can
live
almost everywhere.
However
, in the past, there were several places where
people
could settle.
So
,
rather
than
living
far from
people
and searching for new opportunities, they
used
to gather together, making a
small
community and
living
together in a
so
-called
small
village.
There were definitely
some
advantages.
For example
,
people
who
lived
in a place which is not populated, knew each other well. This meant that when someone needed
help
, could
easily
count on
many
people
. In my opinion, this had led to strong relationships compared with
todays
modern relationships. It is
clear
that with the growing popularity of social media,
people
are less in contact with each other.
On the other hand
, like any other issues, there were
some
drawbacks which made
people
leave
small
villages
. I believe,
people
always have a great eagerness to search for new opportunities. To set an example, there are always going to be more job opportunities in
big
cities
rather
than
small
villages
. Having a better job with higher salary means a better life
in most cases
.
In conclusion
, there were
some
reasons why
people
had to
live
in
small
villages
in the past.
For instance
,
people
could not
live
wherever they wanted,
because
resources like water were not available everywhere.
Thus
,
people
had to overcome such problems
together and
they had stronger relationships compared with
people
living
in modern cities.
However
, lack of
improved
facilities was one of the main setbacks of
living
in a
village
.
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