In the modern world, people are no longer necessary to use food from animals or product from animals such as medicine and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2
In the modern world, people are no longer necessary to use food from animals or product from animals such as medicine and clothing. v. 2
The technological advancements in society, pharmaceuticals, and clothing from animals have drastically reduced, and this becomes a heated debate between people. Personally, I think that people do not need to use animals for these purposes because using animals do not have morals.
On the one hand, scientists cannot test drugs on the body of the human because it can affect awareness of reliable testing. People will feel fear if they have to undergo the processing of testing drugs. Moreover, some animals are using to make food because it has more nutrients and can give energy to people such as beef or seafood because some people are allergies with osteoporosis drugs. Therefore, they need to eat seafood or beef to give nutrient.
I agree with animals are not important to produce for medicine and clothing because of some reasons. First of all, using food or product from the animal is inhumanity and immorality. Animals also hurt, and animals also have emotional. For instance, when people have a cat or dog who will really love their boss. If their boss absents at home, they will wait for until their boss return to home. Therefore, people cannot use them to experiment or eating. Some people are really like using fur shawl from fur animals, this gives to the government to severe comments and stiff opposition from young people during the 21st centuries, and using animals to test drugs, this can make some wrong way because the body of animals does not similar to human.
Finally, using animals for food and medicine is not necessary because people can alter animals by other products which are made from other materials. Therefore, I believe that people do not need to use food and products from animals.
The technological advancements in society, pharmaceuticals, and clothing from
animals
have
drastically
reduced
, and this becomes a heated debate between
people
.
Personally
, I
think
that
people
do not need to
use
animals
for these purposes
because
using
animals
do not have morals.
On the one hand, scientists cannot
test
drugs
on the body of the human
because
it can affect awareness of reliable testing.
People
will feel fear if they
have to
undergo the processing of testing
drugs
.
Moreover
,
some
animals
are using to
make
food
because
it has more nutrients and can give energy to
people
such as beef or seafood
because
some
people
are allergies with osteoporosis
drugs
.
Therefore
, they need to eat seafood or beef to give nutrient.
I
agree
with
animals
are not
important
to produce for medicine and clothing
because
of
some
reasons.
First of all
, using
food
or product from the
animal
is inhumanity and immorality.
Animals
also
hurt, and
animals
also
have emotional.
For instance
, when
people
have a cat or dog who will
really
love
their boss. If their boss absents at home, they will wait for until their boss return to home.
Therefore
,
people
cannot
use
them to experiment or eating.
Some
people
are
really
like using fur shawl from fur
animals
, this gives to the
government
to severe comments and stiff opposition from young
people
during the 21st centuries, and using
animals
to
test
drugs
, this can
make
some
wrong
way
because
the body of
animals
does not similar to human.
Finally
, using
animals
for
food
and medicine is not necessary
because
people
can alter
animals
by other products which
are made
from other materials.
Therefore
, I believe that
people
do not need to
use
food
and products from
animals
.
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33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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