In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (e. g literatures), boys tend to choose science subjects (e. g physics). Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed? Do you agree or disagree? v.6
In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (e. g literatures), boys tend to choose science subjects (e. g physics). Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed? v. 6
Although male students are willing to build a career in science, female students are keen to take craft classes in order to become a well-known artist or sculptor. Personally, I reckon that this tendency is beneficial for both men and women.
There is no denying that art cannot be a lucrative business for many individuals. In this reason, male students should concentrate on the physical demanding jobs and science. A good illustration of this is researching, because in order to achieve success in this sphere, individuals should be dedicated and hard working. Furthermore, art is gentle. Consequently, women can create remarkable objects, because of their natural abilities. To illustrate, many well-known paintings and craft objects are created by women.
On the other hand, there is an opinion that this trend should be changed. However, there is a plethora of reasons why it is beneficial not change this tendency. First of all, in order to work creatively and productively, people should work in the sphere, which they are skilled. In this regard, women are big fans of art. To illustrate, many of them interested in singing and dancing, whereas men are keen to take part in sport competition. Secondly, many women cannot find a work-life balance, if they dedicate a significant amount of their time to their occupations. It is widely accepted that raising children can be challenging for parents. However, women do their best in this activity. As a result, they often cannot find a free time for their job. For instance, many females are not working in developing countries.
To conclude, although there is an opinion that this trend should be changed as soon as possible, because of its unbalance, personally, I believe that this tendency is beneficial for both men and women, because they are skilled at their spheres.
Although male students are willing to build a career in science, female students are keen to take craft classes in order to become a well-known artist or sculptor.
Personally
, I reckon that this tendency is beneficial for both
men
and women.
There is no denying that art cannot be a lucrative business for
many
individuals. In this reason, male students should concentrate on the physical demanding jobs and science. A
good
illustration of this is researching,
because
in order to achieve success in this sphere, individuals should
be dedicated
and
hard working
.
Furthermore
, art is gentle.
Consequently
,
women
can create remarkable objects,
because
of their natural abilities. To illustrate,
many
well-known paintings and craft objects
are created
by women.
On the other hand
, there is an opinion that this trend should be
changed
.
However
, there is a plethora of reasons why it is beneficial not
change
this tendency.
First of all
, in order to work
creatively
and
productively
,
people
should work in the sphere, which they
are skilled
. In this regard,
women
are
big
fans of art. To illustrate,
many
of them interested in singing and dancing, whereas
men
are keen to
take part
in sport competition.
Secondly
,
many
women
cannot find a work-life balance, if they dedicate a significant amount of their time to their occupations. It is
widely
accepted
that raising children can be challenging for parents.
However
,
women
do their best in this activity.
As a result
, they
often
cannot find a free time for their job.
For instance
,
many
females are not working in
developing countries
.
To conclude
, although there is an opinion that this trend should be
changed
as
soon
as possible,
because
of its unbalance,
personally
, I believe that this tendency is beneficial for both
men
and
women
,
because
they
are skilled
at their spheres.
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