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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. v.8

On the other hand, various professions contribute to making our world run smoothly. Doctors put in at least ten years of grueling study and internship; their work saves lives. Teachers educate and inspire young people to be responsible citizens; their efforts produce the citizens of tomorrow. Social workers rescue individuals facing physical, mental and psychological challenges; their intervention creates safer societies.

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. Doctors put in at least ten years of grueling study and internship; their work saves This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
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. Teachers educate and inspire young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 to be responsible citizens; their efforts produce the citizens of tomorrow. Social workers rescue individuals facing physical, mental and psychological challenges; their intervention creates safer societies. 

IELTS essay In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

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