It is true that a lot of people are fond of copying famous fashion trends and hairstyles. There are primary causes for influencing them and In my own perspective, I believe that this is a negative development.
Firstly, people tend to follow latest fashion trends because of the excessive ads on social media. These advertisements are influencing people to buy unneeded things, rather than buying basic needs. Moreover, people tend to stick to trends due to the influence of other people in their workplace or school. In order for them to fit in the society they live in, they must imitate what others wear or use. For instance, when the majority of the people use iPhone model, others choose to purchase the same so that they can also become famed. Hence, these influences some people to adapt to what is popular in styles.
However, I believe that this tendency has given people the negative impact in terms of their attitude. One reason is that following new fashion trends can instill a materialistic attitude. This is because people opt to acquire anything that they are capable of purchasing. As a result, this will imply that people belong to a throw-away society. Another point to consider is that it can establish discrimination. Although there are people who can afford to obtain the things that they like, there are also others who are incapacitated of purchasing expensive things. Consequently, this can be the cause of bullying on students or discrimination in low income earners. Thus, adaptation to what is popular nowadays can only be regarded as negative.
In conclusion, people are adapting to various trends mainly because of too many ads and for sense of belongingness. I believe that this is only discriminating people and encouraging throw-away attitude among people.
It is true that
a lot of
people
are fond of copying
famous
fashion
trends
and hairstyles. There are primary causes for influencing them and In my
own
perspective, I believe that this is a
negative
development.
Firstly
,
people
tend to follow
latest
fashion
trends
because
of the excessive ads on social media. These advertisements are influencing
people
to
buy
unneeded things,
rather
than buying basic needs.
Moreover
,
people
tend to stick to
trends
due to the influence of
other
people
in their workplace or school. In order for them to fit in the society they
live
in, they
must
imitate what others wear or
use
.
For instance
, when the majority of the
people
use
iPhone model, others choose to
purchase
the same
so
that they can
also
become famed.
Hence
, these influences
some
people
to adapt to what is popular in styles.
However
, I believe that this tendency has
given
people
the
negative
impact in terms of their attitude. One reason is that following new fashion
trends
can instill a materialistic attitude. This is
because
people
opt to acquire anything that they are capable of purchasing.
As a result
, this will imply that
people
belong to a throw-away society. Another point to consider is that it can establish discrimination. Although there are
people
who can afford to obtain the things that they like, there are
also
others who
are incapacitated
of purchasing expensive things.
Consequently
, this can be the cause of bullying on students or discrimination in low income earners.
Thus
, adaptation to what is popular nowadays can
only
be regarded
as
negative
.
In conclusion
,
people
are adapting to various
trends
mainly
because
of too
many
ads and for sense of
belongingness
. I believe that this is
only
discriminating
people
and encouraging throw-away attitude among
people
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes