Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner. Discuss both systems and state which one do you think is better. v.3

In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner. v. 3
There is a fact that despite several warnings from medical scientists about the negative effects of fast food on health, the number of people eating it consecutively increases. There are some major reasons for this trend and certain measures can be taken to tackle it. There are two main causes of this trend. Firstly, today's life makes people so busy that they have too many tasks to do every day and sometimes do not want to spend hours cooking meals or going eating out. Whilst, have a meal with fast food only takes people a few minutes and hence they have more time for their work. Another reason why more and more people are eating fast food is that the development of this service type is delivering to consumers a variety of high qualities of serving. You now can easily make an order by various means such as the internet and telephone, and the food will be delivered to you in a surprisingly short time. Additionally, fast food products can satisfy you even if you are a rigorous gourmet. The taste of an Mc Donall's 1955 burger or a Lotteria's cheese stick, for instance, can bring you the appetite that a meal at home may not. There are several actions that people and society can take to solve this issue. A good solution is to keep a healthy lifestyle with daily practices such as working out after work, cycling to schools and offices and doing morning exercises. These activities support people's digestive systems and stimulate them to have healthy and nutritious meals instead of fast food. What is more, to escape from feeling under pressure and lacking time for work, people should balance work and play, take breaks from time to time at workplaces. This helps people become more willing to have a meal out with friends or colleagues. In conclusion, even though there could be inevitable reasons for this problem, I believe that people and society can take certain measures to keep our lives healthy and happy.
There is a fact that despite several warnings from medical scientists about the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
effects of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
on health, the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
eating it
consecutively
increases. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
major reasons for this trend and certain measures can
be taken
to tackle it.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
There
are two main causes of this trend.
Firstly
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
's life
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
busy that they have too
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
tasks to do every day and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
do not want to spend hours cooking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meals
or going eating out. Whilst, have a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meal
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
takes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
a few minutes and
hence
they have more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
for their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
. Another reason why more and more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are eating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
is that the development of this service type is delivering to consumers a variety of high qualities of serving. You
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
can
easily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
an order by various means such as the internet and telephone, and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
will
be delivered
to you in a
surprisingly
short
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
Additionally
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
products can satisfy you even if you are a rigorous gourmet. The taste of
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
an
Possible spelling mistake found.
Mc
Possible spelling mistake found.
Donall
's 1955 burger or a
Possible spelling mistake found.
Lotteria
's cheese stick,
for instance
, can bring you the appetite that a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meal
at home may not.

There are several actions that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
and society can take to solve this issue. A
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
solution is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
a healthy lifestyle with daily practices such as working out after
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
, cycling to schools and offices and doing morning exercises. These activities support
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's digestive systems and stimulate them to have healthy and nutritious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meals
instead
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
.
What is more
, to escape from feeling under pressure and lacking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
should balance
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
and play, take breaks from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
at workplaces. This
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
become more willing to have a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meal
out with friends or colleagues.

In conclusion
,
even though
there could be inevitable reasons for this problem, I believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
and society can take certain measures to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
healthy and happy.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
338 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts