Some people think that children aged four should be sent to schools while others believe that the most suitable age is seven or eight. I completely disagree with the former since children aged four are still too young. However, I agree with the latter and I believe that seven or eight is a better age for children to go to school.
Four years old children are too young and it sending them to schools would be a challenge. Firstly, they do not have the required skills to be in schools since a lot of children at this age lack focus and find it difficult to communicate with others effectively. For instance, they might find it quite daunting to comprehend complicated subjects such as mathematics or science. Secondly, young children need time to play and discover the world instead of being locked up in schools to study. They might not tolerate academic pressure since they cannot handle stress at this point in their lives.
On the other hand, older children are capable of going to schools and even excel at studying. At this age, their brains are ready to understand school subjects and communicate their ideas efficiently with their teachers and peers. Furthermore, since they have spent their early childhood years without stress and worries, they are eager to start their formal education and are more likely to do well academically than their counterparts who started their aducation at four.
To conclude, children aged four are still too young to go to school and it would be unfair to ruin their childhood by forcing them to study hard while they should be enjoying their lives. However, seven or eight years old children have developed the required skills to excel academically and are ready to start their education.
Some
people
think
that
children
aged four should be
sent
to
schools
while others believe that the most suitable
age
is seven or eight. I completely disagree with the former since
children
aged four are
still
too
young
.
However
, I
agree
with the latter and I believe that seven or eight is a better
age
for
children
to go to school.
Four years
old
children
are too
young
and it sending them to
schools
would be a challenge.
Firstly
, they do not have the required
skills
to be in
schools
since
a lot of
children
at this
age
lack focus and find it difficult to communicate with others
effectively
.
For instance
, they might find it quite daunting to comprehend complicated subjects such as mathematics or science.
Secondly
,
young
children
need time to play and discover the world
instead
of
being locked
up in
schools
to study. They might not tolerate academic pressure since they cannot handle
stress
at this point in their
lives
.
On the other hand
, older
children
are capable of going to
schools
and even excel at studying. At this
age
, their brains are ready to understand
school
subjects and communicate their
ideas
efficiently
with their teachers and peers.
Furthermore
, since they have spent their early childhood years without
stress
and worries, they are eager to
start
their formal education and are more likely to do well
academically
than their counterparts who
started
their
aducation
at four.
To conclude
,
children
aged four are
still
too
young
to go to
school
and it would be unfair to ruin their childhood by forcing them to study
hard
while they should be enjoying their
lives
.
However
, seven or eight years
old
children
have developed the required
skills
to excel
academically
and are ready to
start
their education.
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