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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages? v.3

Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. v. 3
In our world today, internet networking has occupied a major position in our daily activities including at home, our free time and work place. Besides achieving effective communication with friends, family and colleagues, people surf the web to get updates on different things including jobs, fashion, sports. In addition, network people use of internet has improved from 2G to 3G/ 4G and now 5G in some countries. These networks are made available by different network providers at affordable rates and could be shared with different mobile devices and laptops via tethering, routers and Wi-Fi. However, there are negative consequences of internet networking, including addiction, depression and suicide ideations, but its advantages still outweighs them. Prior to the event of internet networking, our forefathers communicate with friends and love ones via letter writing. This usually takes days to get to the receiver and severally days for the writer to get the feedback from the receiver. The convenience of sending messages and mails in the comfort of our rooms, bedrooms and offices using internet networking is simple awesome. Messages sent is received and replied to in seconds and minutes. While cybercrime is on the rise, one is advised not to reveal his/her password to anyone and should be security conscious Again, people needed to buy newspaper in those days to get the latest news, which has been made way simpler now by information technology. Latest news can be read by browsing the web or by tuning in to any channel of your choice of a television set connected to a decoder. In conclusion, internet networking is the best thing to have happened to our generation, but one need to apply self-discipline to its use.
In our world
today
, internet networking has occupied a major position in our daily activities including at home, our free time and work place.
Besides
achieving effective communication with friends, family and colleagues,
people
surf the web to
get
updates on
different
things including jobs, fashion, sports.
In addition
, network
people
use
of internet has
improved
from 2G to 3G/ 4G and
now
5G in
some
countries. These networks
are made
available by
different
network providers at affordable rates and could
be shared
with
different
mobile devices and laptops via tethering, routers and Wi-Fi.
However
, there are
negative
consequences of internet networking, including addiction, depression and suicide
ideations
,
but
its advantages
still
outweighs them.

Prior to the
event
of internet networking, our forefathers communicate with friends and
love
ones via letter writing. This
usually
takes days to
get
to the receiver and
severally
days for the writer to
get
the feedback from the receiver. The convenience of sending messages and mails in the comfort of our rooms, bedrooms and offices using internet networking is simple awesome. Messages
sent
is received
and replied to in seconds and minutes. While cybercrime is on the rise, one
is advised
not to reveal his/her password to anyone and should be security
conscious


Again,
people
needed to
buy
newspaper in those days to
get
the latest news, which has
been made
way simpler
now
by information technology.
Latest
news can
be read
by browsing the web or by tuning in to any channel of your choice of a television set connected to a decoder.

In conclusion
, internet networking is the best thing to have happened to our generation,
but
one need to apply self-discipline to its
use
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
6
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